The Life of a Geezerete
Contest entry15 total reviews
Comment from reconciled
Hey Jo...-smile-
well if I'm got a geezer, I'm gonna do it gitchy gitchy goo......d. haha... I pray all goes well with the surgery. love to you ...michael
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
Hey Jo...-smile-
well if I'm got a geezer, I'm gonna do it gitchy gitchy goo......d. haha... I pray all goes well with the surgery. love to you ...michael
Comment Written 31-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2016
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Thanks, Michael, for the well wishes. I hope everything goes well ,too. :o) I'll be back.
Jo
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The Life of a Geezerete, is a fun work that helps change our view of getting older from one of being feeble to being free. Love the term, Geezerete. I'll try it out on their wife to see if she likes it. Good stuff.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2016
This poem, The Life of a Geezerete, is a fun work that helps change our view of getting older from one of being feeble to being free. Love the term, Geezerete. I'll try it out on their wife to see if she likes it. Good stuff.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2016
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I am laughing at your comments, Bill. I hope your wife don't take the term wrong. :o) I endearingly call my husband, "Old Geezer" and he calls me his Geezerete. :O)
Comment from Ogden
Atta girl! I love your spirit and attitude! You can laugh at yourself, and do it in rhyme! "Old" is not the right word for you.
Actually, "geezerete" doesn't sound right, either. Maybe the more feminine geezerina, or geezerella would do.
Wishing you good health, and good luck in the contest,
Ogden
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2016
Atta girl! I love your spirit and attitude! You can laugh at yourself, and do it in rhyme! "Old" is not the right word for you.
Actually, "geezerete" doesn't sound right, either. Maybe the more feminine geezerina, or geezerella would do.
Wishing you good health, and good luck in the contest,
Ogden
Comment Written 13-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2016
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Oh, I love geezerella. LOL. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem poking fun at myself.
Jo
Comment from nancyjam
This is cute and I''m sure many can relate.
Comes A time when we just have to stop worrying about aging
and enjoy life..
Your rhyming is very good and the meter flows smoothly.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2016
This is cute and I''m sure many can relate.
Comes A time when we just have to stop worrying about aging
and enjoy life..
Your rhyming is very good and the meter flows smoothly.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 13-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2016
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Thanks, Nancy, for reviewing my poem poking fun at myself.
Comment from Lisa Deverick
Very well done on this humorous poem! I have never heard the term 'geezerette', but I think you may have started something! haha Great rhyme and rhythm -made it fun to read.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2016
Very well done on this humorous poem! I have never heard the term 'geezerette', but I think you may have started something! haha Great rhyme and rhythm -made it fun to read.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2016
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Thanks, Lisa, for reviewing my silly poem poking fun at myself.
Jo
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Is that a picture of you? Are you 81? You certainly don't look it. I loved your poem. Entitling yourself a "geezerete" made me laugh my butt off. Great rhyme and meter. An overall great poem. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
Is that a picture of you? Are you 81? You certainly don't look it. I loved your poem. Entitling yourself a "geezerete" made me laugh my butt off. Great rhyme and meter. An overall great poem. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 12-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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Thank you ,Susanne, for your review of my poem. No, it's not me but a picture of my Mom. She is 87 now and still
laughing and going strong. The poem, however, was about me. I'm 67... so old enough to be a geezerete. My husband and I have a running joke. He's the old geezer and I'm his geezerete. I'm so glad you laughed at my silliness.
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It was a fun and entertaining read! God bless and hugs, Susanne
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It was a fun and entertaining read! God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahaha..."Guess I'll keep it...til my time is done," indeed, Anonymous Poet. In fact, when you think about it, you really don't have much of a choice, do you?
Great entry for the contest, and very fun to read.
Best of luck!
~Dean ;)
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
Hahaha..."Guess I'll keep it...til my time is done," indeed, Anonymous Poet. In fact, when you think about it, you really don't have much of a choice, do you?
Great entry for the contest, and very fun to read.
Best of luck!
~Dean ;)
Comment Written 12-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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Thanks, Dean, for laughing at my poem making fun of myself. My husband and I have a running joke. He is the
old geezer and I'm his geezerete.
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You're very welcome.
Thank YOU for the laugh.
Good luck!
~Dean
Comment from RoostyNester
I loved your poem. Yes, we all get old. I'm nearing your age also. The wonderful part of getting old, is that you leave a well lived life behind. To know you made a memory for your loved ones to keep when God takes you. That's your legacy! Your poem was well written with a touch of humor, which I like. And our best humor, is when it points toward us. Well done.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
I loved your poem. Yes, we all get old. I'm nearing your age also. The wonderful part of getting old, is that you leave a well lived life behind. To know you made a memory for your loved ones to keep when God takes you. That's your legacy! Your poem was well written with a touch of humor, which I like. And our best humor, is when it points toward us. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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Thank you so much for reviewing my poem. I am glad you saw the humor.
Comment from RYME4U
From one geezerette to another: Good job! This is very well written and I love the subtle humor. My husband is a Geezer too. I'll be 80 next month. Great job on the poem!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
From one geezerette to another: Good job! This is very well written and I love the subtle humor. My husband is a Geezer too. I'll be 80 next month. Great job on the poem!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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Thank you so much for enjoying and commenting on my poem.
Comment from Hayley Solomon
Awesome!
I now look forward to becoming a geezerette myself. As a poem with humour it is just lovely. From a literary point of view there are issues with rhyme and meter, but frankly for the purpose you wrote this, they don't matter. Well done.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
Awesome!
I now look forward to becoming a geezerette myself. As a poem with humour it is just lovely. From a literary point of view there are issues with rhyme and meter, but frankly for the purpose you wrote this, they don't matter. Well done.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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Thank you, Hayley, for commenting on my poem. Yes, I'm afraid my rhyme and meter got away from me... I'm glad it did not spoil your fun.