What A Surprise It Was
Unbelieveable4 total reviews
Comment from Eric1
Hi cwr, this is a really good entry for this particular competition, I didn't know that bears could do that sort of damage! Never seen one in real life though!I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
Hi cwr, this is a really good entry for this particular competition, I didn't know that bears could do that sort of damage! Never seen one in real life though!I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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bears are a gruff bunch in real life
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I'll bet, nearly as bad as our politicians, lol!
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Comment from Winslow
Dear Country,
When in bear country take all precautions so this doesn't happen but I guess it would not have mattered in this case. Bears are very smart and sometimes can't be denied.
This could be improved by not repeating words. For example here is a suggested edit for this section.
I will get in touch with the Rangers in the area and have them come out and keep watch.
The Berries on the trees aren't great this year. Their food source is lacking so they look elsewhere to eat. With the brown bear population on the rise the bears are hopefully going to be hunted in the fall to slow them down a bit.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2016
Dear Country,
When in bear country take all precautions so this doesn't happen but I guess it would not have mattered in this case. Bears are very smart and sometimes can't be denied.
This could be improved by not repeating words. For example here is a suggested edit for this section.
I will get in touch with the Rangers in the area and have them come out and keep watch.
The Berries on the trees aren't great this year. Their food source is lacking so they look elsewhere to eat. With the brown bear population on the rise the bears are hopefully going to be hunted in the fall to slow them down a bit.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 07-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2016
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thank you for your kindness
Comment from Dustybones
Fun ending...yes how would you sue a bear or some act of nature. I would suggest using a space between paragraphs to break up ideas. dustybones
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016
Fun ending...yes how would you sue a bear or some act of nature. I would suggest using a space between paragraphs to break up ideas. dustybones
Comment Written 04-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016
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Comment from Kooky Clown
Good story good content and unusual topic I found it an interesting read I have heard of bears breaking into places for food and did not think of the possible damage they could do.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016
Good story good content and unusual topic I found it an interesting read I have heard of bears breaking into places for food and did not think of the possible damage they could do.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016
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