Tadpole
A Bedtime Story For Cody8 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
A good tweaking of the reader: "They recently rescued the Black Lab from the Astatula Humane Society" A much healthier statement than some,
'every boy needs a good gun.' : "Every boy needs a real good dog," A little gallows humor: "Did Larry snuff out his wife?" I'm starting at the end of the list, on the ones about Cody. I will eventually have read them all.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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A good tweaking of the reader: "They recently rescued the Black Lab from the Astatula Humane Society" A much healthier statement than some,
'every boy needs a good gun.' : "Every boy needs a real good dog," A little gallows humor: "Did Larry snuff out his wife?" I'm starting at the end of the list, on the ones about Cody. I will eventually have read them all.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
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***Grin***
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Brett,
Nice little tale you have crafted here from your existing characters. Good pacing and tone throughout the piece.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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Hi Brett,
Nice little tale you have crafted here from your existing characters. Good pacing and tone throughout the piece.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 09-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this little tale. Just something different from the Cody Schroder novels for his many fans to enjoy.
Comment from barkingdog
I don't understand how this was in the Kidnapped contest, but otherwise the Sheriff's choice of bedtime stories for Cody is really weird. I'm left with a boy dreaming of a body hanging in a meat locker. haha
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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I don't understand how this was in the Kidnapped contest, but otherwise the Sheriff's choice of bedtime stories for Cody is really weird. I'm left with a boy dreaming of a body hanging in a meat locker. haha
:) e
Comment Written 09-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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What other Bedtime Stories would the Sheriff tell Cody besides those dealing with crimes?
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There's always Barnes & Noble or the library. Lots of stories there. They're called books. haha
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Cody much prefers the Sheriff's real life stories to any other. Perhaps we should contribute to Barnes and Nobles, and libraries, collections. What do you think?
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Go for it. haha
Comment from foxangie123
I enjoy these stories about and with Cody. Very well written and a great entry to the contest being held with the prompt. Way to go.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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I enjoy these stories about and with Cody. Very well written and a great entry to the contest being held with the prompt. Way to go.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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This was just something a little different than the Cody Schroder novels.
Many FanStorians have asked me to show other dimensions of what they call "The most popular character being written about on FanStory today".
So, I will probably write other stories surrounding Cody for them to enjoy as well as the novels.
Comment from Ginger Banks
I find the story interesting, however, this Sheriff sharing this kind of crime scene story with a child who appears to not even be his teens yet, would be tantamount to child endangerment and or abuse - for the graphic content alone. Also, why is this young kid with a Sheriff instead of his parents? Anyway, thank you for sharing.
SPaGs:
"... the town's butcher. He sold phenominal [phenomenal] cuts... "
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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I find the story interesting, however, this Sheriff sharing this kind of crime scene story with a child who appears to not even be his teens yet, would be tantamount to child endangerment and or abuse - for the graphic content alone. Also, why is this young kid with a Sheriff instead of his parents? Anyway, thank you for sharing.
SPaGs:
"... the town's butcher. He sold phenominal [phenomenal] cuts... "
Comment Written 03-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Appreciate your comments and support.
However, there is a lot of backstory you seem not aware of involving these two characters.
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You're welcome.
Comment from GingerG
Good effort.
I thought it came to an abrupt end.
The only point I can really make is that you talk about the sheriff then become the sheriff.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Good effort.
I thought it came to an abrupt end.
The only point I can really make is that you talk about the sheriff then become the sheriff.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Not sure I pick up on your interpretation of this story????
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I just thought you it came to an abrupt end
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The part I did not understand about your review was where you said "you talk about the sheriff then become the sheriff" I don't see that???
Comment from jlsavell
Author, I do believe you have met the challenge with exceptional writing. Wonderful development of characters, imagery and plot in such a small frame. Truly exceptional... jlsavell
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Author, I do believe you have met the challenge with exceptional writing. Wonderful development of characters, imagery and plot in such a small frame. Truly exceptional... jlsavell
Comment Written 03-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this little story.
Your comments, support, and the 6 Stars are appreciated.
For much more about these characters my books Astatula and Missing, which is currently being written, can be found in my portfolio should you care to read them.
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Well that would be great, but I do not know your name, authors name was not displayed, so in order to not break site rules pm me after contest has ended. I would love to read your work. Then I will fan you. Jimi
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I will be glad to do that. I definitely do not want to break site rules. Keep everything on the up and up.
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yes, most definitely. If this is a taste of your writing, you are a phenomenal writer..
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Well that would be great, but I do not know your name, authors name was not displayed, so in order to not break site rules pm me after contest has ended. I would love to read your work. Then I will fan you. Jimi
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yes, most definitely. If this is a taste of your writing, you are a phenomenal writer..
Comment from cupa tea
That is a cute little story...I think it was a good idea to have someone tell the story to someone else...I didn't see anything to suggest you change or correct...Good luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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That is a cute little story...I think it was a good idea to have someone tell the story to someone else...I didn't see anything to suggest you change or correct...Good luck in the contest...
Comment Written 03-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this little story. Your comments and support appreciated.
