Act of Endurance
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Comment from riyaarora930
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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Wow! I thank you for your kind offer, which I will deny its request. Also, thanking you for your generous rate and touching words.
Comment from RGstar
This was an unusual poem, and such I like to see. Back from a little break, good to see you still here. I read this a couple of times to dig a little deeper.
It is good to read something a little different and to respect the creativity of such
My best wishes.
RGsar.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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This was an unusual poem, and such I like to see. Back from a little break, good to see you still here. I read this a couple of times to dig a little deeper.
It is good to read something a little different and to respect the creativity of such
My best wishes.
RGsar.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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I appreciate your heart warming thoughts, thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments. Glad to see you too.
Comment from victor 66
All the things that you've written in your poem, there is so much food for thought and so many things that I don't know about and I am unaware of. You bring up many concepts that I'm not sure I can comprehend but will give it a try . Best wishes.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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All the things that you've written in your poem, there is so much food for thought and so many things that I don't know about and I am unaware of. You bring up many concepts that I'm not sure I can comprehend but will give it a try . Best wishes.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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I believe we were there and the stated world of darkness was created and we became placed in flesh. My beliefs being we were placed in flesh. Thanking you for you generous rate and welcomed comments.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Sugarray77
You have written a very eloquent verse with deeply philosophical points and meanings. Thank you for sharing these ideas with us here.
Melissa
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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You have written a very eloquent verse with deeply philosophical points and meanings. Thank you for sharing these ideas with us here.
Melissa
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Glad some aspects were found appealing to your interests. Thanking you for your heart felt warmth about this read and that generous rate.
Comment from Gert sherwood
TPAC
This chapter in you book Act of Endurance your free verse poem Light and Darkness
is deep and to me what your are saying when there was only darkness. God with His power said, "let there be light"
I'm pondering of what you meant by the following---
The light is known it's seen about real things, uncertainty of a dark it stings opposite reason, state a trail rings word axed a fake fact reality.
Gert
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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TPAC
This chapter in you book Act of Endurance your free verse poem Light and Darkness
is deep and to me what your are saying when there was only darkness. God with His power said, "let there be light"
I'm pondering of what you meant by the following---
The light is known it's seen about real things, uncertainty of a dark it stings opposite reason, state a trail rings word axed a fake fact reality.
Gert
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Another time before the earth us as Angel before Satan lie, we all were there finding placement in a new heaven from Angel on earth. Glad aspects in this read were found appealing to your interests.
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You are most welcome TPAC
Gert
Comment from Every_Dia
I was a bit confused because this is in poetry and its a chapter. However, this was well done and beautifully written. I think some context in description would also be helpful!
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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I was a bit confused because this is in poetry and its a chapter. However, this was well done and beautifully written. I think some context in description would also be helpful!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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An old story before time, living among Angel deeds done, creating events the earth and flesh host. Thanking you for your generous rate despite faults and your touching comment prevailing this read.
Comment from Alli Johnston
Such a thought-provoking and interesting poem. Not what I was expecting from the title but I really enjoyed it. Your interpretation of the word and creation is refreshing
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Such a thought-provoking and interesting poem. Not what I was expecting from the title but I really enjoyed it. Your interpretation of the word and creation is refreshing
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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I have found many interesting aspects prevailing our God beliefs, given lies that cover the true message conveyed in the scriptures. I do believe in evil intentions. Thanking you for this generous rate and pleasing viewpoint shared by you.
Comment from Hopeful2
I don't quite know how to review your poem. I feel like your thoughts, and your expression of them, exceed my humble understanding. You have obviously dealt with some deep, ethereal concepts and are to be congratulated on your insights.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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I don't quite know how to review your poem. I feel like your thoughts, and your expression of them, exceed my humble understanding. You have obviously dealt with some deep, ethereal concepts and are to be congratulated on your insights.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Yeah. That and more. I'm glad not all aspects in this write were displeasing to your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate and thought to consider.
Comment from Jaime Deagle
You did a great job on this piece. It was beautifully done. You were able to convey a lot of emotion with it. I struggled a bit with a 4 star or 5-star rating as i found the poem presented in this way more like a short story. But I hate it when someone ruins my rating because of the creative style I have chosen. so 5 stars it is and thank you for challenging my thoughts on what a poem should look like. you reminded me there is no right way to write beautiful things. Thanks for sharing your writing and as always keep on writing.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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You did a great job on this piece. It was beautifully done. You were able to convey a lot of emotion with it. I struggled a bit with a 4 star or 5-star rating as i found the poem presented in this way more like a short story. But I hate it when someone ruins my rating because of the creative style I have chosen. so 5 stars it is and thank you for challenging my thoughts on what a poem should look like. you reminded me there is no right way to write beautiful things. Thanks for sharing your writing and as always keep on writing.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Now thanking you for those truth pounding statements, wishing you the best in your attempted endeavors. I appreciate your generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from estory
There's an interesting interplay of convoluted language here that creates this surreal effect. Through the disjointed sentances we still have that sense of light and darkness, music and silence, and by implication, good and evil. We seem to be caught between them, struggling to take a side, to climb out of the darkness and into the light. Interesting original style. Very much in the Beat camp. estory
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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There's an interesting interplay of convoluted language here that creates this surreal effect. Through the disjointed sentances we still have that sense of light and darkness, music and silence, and by implication, good and evil. We seem to be caught between them, struggling to take a side, to climb out of the darkness and into the light. Interesting original style. Very much in the Beat camp. estory
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Glad some aspects detailed in this particular read were appealing to your interests, loving the way you broke down its message. Good shout. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
