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Just a clay vessel.

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Comment from Judy Couch
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Very good poem. It rhymes well and has good rhythm. It carries a great message. We are all made by God and we shouldn't criticize others. They're His kids, too.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
    Thanks Judy, for these really great comments and fine review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Bollie
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This is an excellent poem that highlights God's infinite wisdom. For God made all of us unique and for his glory. The poem has beautiful verses that have no forced rhyming with strong message. I was so close to giving you 6 stars, but I noticed a tiny variation in the syllable count from 7 to 9. Overall this is a great entry. Good luck and congadulations.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
    Thanks for these really great comments and fine review, blessings, Roy
Comment from chocoletdrop052
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Well spent, a wonderful talent you have displayed. We are all molded in the form of Mankind because the LORD said: Let us make mankind in our own image. We are partly angels from above and sown in the Holy Father's love. So when we are part of the Heel of the LORD, Then we will know to listen to His voice. Who can instruct the LORD who made us in this clay form, for no one knows the Son except the Father and no knows the Father except His Only Son. Our image is just a display for the world to recognize the Father, Son and the Holy Spirit today. Amen

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
    Thanks so much for your beautiful words and and very wise review, blessings. Roy
Comment from TPAC
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True faith conveyances touching in presented spoken state and appealing in its given concerns: a creative write with thought-provoking words said.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
    Thanks for these really great comments and fine review, blessings, Roy
Comment from BeasPeas
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This is a lovely poem, Roy. One of my favorite hymns is, "You Are the Potter and I Am The Clay." Puts things in perspective, too. This looks like it is/was a good entry for the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2016
    Thanks Marilyn for the marvellous review,
Comment from Janet Foor
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Excellent message in "What is a Clay vessel" contest. He definitely is the potter and we are the clay. I particularly liked the last stanza. Well done and good luck in the contest

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
    Thanks so much Janet, for these wonderful remarks and stars, b
Comment from lalique
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The poem is thought provoking. I am not sure that I agree with everything the poem has to say. It is a reasonably brief poem that flows well.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
    thanks
Comment from write hand blue
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Although of religious content, this is an easy to read poem. It compares a clay pot to a supposed person's life.

Well written with a good rhyming scheme. Good luck in the competition... ~Mel~

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
    Thanks so much for the great review,
Comment from Eric1
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Hi Mystery Author, this is a wonderful entry for this particular competition, beautifully written words with excellent rhyme and flow and one of the best I have reviewed, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
    Thanks Eric for this wonderful review and amazing stars,
reply by Eric1 on 02-Jul-2016
    You are very welcome, well deserved.
Comment from writeapoem
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This is an excellent entry and a nicely written poem. It flows with a rhythm. I like your inspiration coming from God's word regarding the potter over the clay. All the best

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
    Thanks for these wonderful words and review