Comment from MacMhuirich

Excellent

I love seeing Sun Flowers standing tall in the garden. This is a good write for the flowers. My children always came home from school with a pot containing a seed for growing - we only ever got dwarf flowers :)
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely Thursday.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Good job on the flower 5.7.5, sunflowers are full of love, they always have a way of brightening up your day. good luck on this and have a good day

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

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Comment from enitsalemap

Excellent

This is a lovely 5-7-5 poem about a sunflower. I have always felt a great attachment to these yellow dazzlers. Not only are they spectacular but they feed the birds when they are done blooming. Only God could have created such a thing.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

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Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

I love this so much as it is most beautiful with wonderful imagery of words. The picture is most amazing as well. A most fantastic poem of imagery.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

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Comment from sage17611

Excellent

Sun flowers are beautiful and mysterious looking, I've always liked this flower. I like the theme of your poem which is well written. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice second part of the week.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5 about flowers, Sunflowers, has only sixteen syllables as line three is missing one: and God of course. Just need another word. I do like sunflowers though. Happy day.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

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Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

I might make the last line "and The Lord of course." since I don't think a
five seven five is as flexible as a haiku. But I'm not the judge, and the
flower five seven four looks fine to me.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

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Comment from Lynn27

Excellent

This is a great poem! Loved the photo! You did a great job in this contest. Your lines pack full details that painted the image in my mind.

Happy Writing!

Lynn

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 5-7-5 flower poem. They always turn their heads to the sun, that is where their power lies. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

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Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Excellent

Hello,

A very sweet 5-7-4 ("and God of course" ... missing the 5th syllable in this last line ... perhaps 'and God's will of course' ? ). Terrific photo of sunflowers! Sunflowers are such 'happy' looking things with their bright yellow large flowers.

Yes, Brooke is very much missed by this reader too! Best wishes for the contest!

Connie

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week. I changed it, but thanks for spotting it.