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Comment from Ginger Banks
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This is a fun poem, almost a Haiku but for the 6-7-5; the alphabet soup picture is smilingly perfect for the words, thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016
    Working with Wording is five syllables. Thank you for giving this a look.
Comment from Lisa Deverick
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This is a really clever and original poem. You are what you eat! I am eating words now at 11:30 at night... hopefully they will digest and new ideas will be the output! LOL Well done friend

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016
    Thank you, Lisa, for the kind review. Bon Appeti!
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very good poem you have penned. It truly made me hungry for that type of soup. Haven't had any in a long time. Very good wording and imagery. Teri

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016
    Thank you, Teri, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from frogbook
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Haha. Perhaps when I have writer's block I shall try a bit of alphabet soup, now that I know the secret. Very funny and entertaining.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2016
    Thank you, JoAnn, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
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In my house there are two levels of questions and two sets of answers.
1.
Q. What is for dinner?
A. Doesn't matter you are going to eat whatever I cook
2.
Q. What is for dinner?
A. Whatever you decide to cook
Summation. Why ask a question that will always be answered the same way each and every time.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
    Thank you, nomi, for the related response. Bill
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is a cute write, bill, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the words that are part of a writer's soul, some that are digested well and others that are spewed out with vicious intent, lol. I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
    Thank you for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Walu Feral
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Hahahahaha! G'day Bill. You are really good at these little pieces mate. Once again you've come up with a very well presented and creative piece. I love the wit in your work.

Well done.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016
    Thank you, Fez, for giving this a look. Bill