On Higher Grounds
Sonnet-A search for living on a higher ground68 total reviews
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
There is always a better way. If you can admit it to yourself you can find it. Words can heal the heart, lift the soul, and even make us dance when sung to music. May all the blessings of this world make it better for all of us.
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There is always a better way. If you can admit it to yourself you can find it. Words can heal the heart, lift the soul, and even make us dance when sung to music. May all the blessings of this world make it better for all of us.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Jay,
A faultless presentation of a sonnet, displaying all of your usual sincerity regarding life and living.
"Our deeds provide the legacy we leave,"
So true.
Reg
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Dear Jay,
A faultless presentation of a sonnet, displaying all of your usual sincerity regarding life and living.
"Our deeds provide the legacy we leave,"
So true.
Reg
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
Comment from Bicpen
Excellent much to be said about this one with a voice of true reason and a gravity that holds its universe in harmony and peace. It delivers well and is crafted my a master quill.
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Excellent much to be said about this one with a voice of true reason and a gravity that holds its universe in harmony and peace. It delivers well and is crafted my a master quill.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written, thought-provoking sonnet conveys a strong message about the power of our words and deeds to affect the lives and futures of others. Some people never realize how their words impact others.
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Your well-written, thought-provoking sonnet conveys a strong message about the power of our words and deeds to affect the lives and futures of others. Some people never realize how their words impact others.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
Comment from moongirlwriter
Yes, and thank goodness for the higher ground of the afterlife. There are many days when living life on earth feels as though we are existing in the living hell. Very nicely written. The best to you with this piece.
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Yes, and thank goodness for the higher ground of the afterlife. There are many days when living life on earth feels as though we are existing in the living hell. Very nicely written. The best to you with this piece.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your wise advice about dedicating ourselves to positive thoughts and deeds. Your rhymed sonnet form and "web" metaphor were very effective. Cheers- Joan
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I admired your wise advice about dedicating ourselves to positive thoughts and deeds. Your rhymed sonnet form and "web" metaphor were very effective. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
Comment from Lance S. Loria
A wonderful positive message convey beautifully by your sonnet. When they go low, we go high were echos this past few years. Conducting one's life on higher ground is the goal of all Christians. Thank you for sharing.
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A wonderful positive message convey beautifully by your sonnet. When they go low, we go high were echos this past few years. Conducting one's life on higher ground is the goal of all Christians. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
Comment from Susan Larson
Your final line, May words, thoughts , deeds lead on to higher ground,
'tis there life's greater blessings may be found. make me think of our confession in church "We have sinned against you in thought, word and deed, by what we have done and by what we left undone." It had me reflecting on both. Good thoughts.
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Your final line, May words, thoughts , deeds lead on to higher ground,
'tis there life's greater blessings may be found. make me think of our confession in church "We have sinned against you in thought, word and deed, by what we have done and by what we left undone." It had me reflecting on both. Good thoughts.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, my friend. This is a beautiful [oem you've penned. A very inspiring, lovely piece. Take care! ~Kerry
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Hello there, my friend. This is a beautiful [oem you've penned. A very inspiring, lovely piece. Take care! ~Kerry
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
Comment from susand3022
Hi Jaybird, You remind people every day of the simplicities in life and that the best things in life, are indeed free. The only thing that they may cost you is your time and patience, a small price to pay for the end results. :)
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Hi Jaybird, You remind people every day of the simplicities in life and that the best things in life, are indeed free. The only thing that they may cost you is your time and patience, a small price to pay for the end results. :)
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
