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Comment from Ginger Banks
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A very nice short story, just a beautiful tribute, and she sounds like a lovely lady who likes to write and sing. It would be a treat to have a sit and swap tales.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2016
    she is a lovely lady
reply by Ginger Banks on 07-Jul-2016
    I can see this, and you're welcome.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very good write you have done on behalf of Miss Cookie. I love her work that I have been able to read. You showed genuine love for her and her work. Great contest entry.. Teri

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2016
    thank you for your kindness
Comment from foxangie123
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This is so true and such a magnificent tribute to her. She is a very special lady and walking angel as I see it. She has a most beautiful glow indeed. Love this.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
    she is a real special lady
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
    she is a real special lady
Comment from A.A.A.EXHILARATING RIDE
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A lovely, deserving tribute to Cookie. I love the picture and your character story even as a relative new comer to this site. And I can see Cookie like my lovely 85 year old neighbour always welcoming and eager to share a story. Thank you for sharing, happy days, Maureen*&*

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016
    this lady is a gem
reply by A.A.A.EXHILARATING RIDE on 09-Jun-2016
    Love to you and Cookie, Maureen*&*
Comment from Ideasaregems-Dawn
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There's a nice, relaxed tone to this, my friend.

Some punctuation misses -

1)"...sit awhile(;)" - needs a semi-colon or a double dash, like this --
2)" ...a spell(;) -same as above
3)"...lend an ear(;) - same
4)"...but hey(,) who..." - needs a comma

Best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
    thank you kindly for the heads up I had the marks there but some how they didn't show up whats up with fanstory?
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
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Miss Cookie has reviewed my poetry over the years. I always enjoyed her great reviews and those sincere comments. There were times, in my early years, she would make suggestion that helped my poem to be better.

She is quite the caring woman and always there to be helpful. I wish I could sit with her to chat about things we have experienced in our lives.

I wish you well in this contest and also have a great day,,,,,,Jim

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
    you are so kind and I am sure she wishes she could visit with all of us she is a nice person.
Comment from enitsalemap
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Now that I have read your story about Miss Cookie, I will have to lookie her up and see what she is writing. It is sweet to have this tribute. Through your descriptive writing I feel as if I got to know her a little bit.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
    she is a terrific lady