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Don't Mess With A Witch

A witch divorce

32 total reviews 
Comment from amada
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Wow, congratulations. This is a very good original short story. Very creative because of the witch element. Of course, witches don't put up with crap!

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
    Thank you. Makes a person want to be a witch sometimes, right?
reply by amada on 06-Jun-2016
    Oh yeah! :-)
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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As this well written story depicts messing with a witch can be a deadly decision.

She appears to only be concerned about what she wants and it also seems he is much better off without her.

Should be a good contest entry.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
    Thank you, Brett. sometimes being a witch would be good.
Comment from enitsalemap
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I love it! When you are done, you are done. I do think flash fiction is great fun to write and I can tell that you had a lot of fun with this little story. Using the writing prompt words was also interesting. It has been fascinating to read all the different stories with these prompt words in them. Yours is a good one for sure.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
    Thank you, my friend. I love writing these short-short stories, They are fun and a great challenge.
reply by enitsalemap on 05-Jun-2016
    thanks for the good read
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Ouch, that's pretty darn nasty. Of course, one never knows what can happen at night with large rolling stones.
Point taken...don't mess with a witch.
Or a woman in general, because we can all turn into witches at the flip of the proverbial switch.
I loved the story, and the way the witch was just casually doing her job. Too cute,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016
    Thank you. I think we would all like to be a witch once in a while.
reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 04-Jun-2016
    You are so right!
Comment from mfowler
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It was becoming very obvious by mid story that this annoyed witch was going to use her skill set to pay back her husband. But kill him with a rock by remote control. That was a shock, and funny in a black humoured kind of way. Great little flash. I hope you do well.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016
    Thank you. I do love writing these short-short stories, they are fun and a great challenge.
Comment from kathleenspalding
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Oh my gosh! Scary woman! But he had it coming, LOL! Great job telling a complete story with very few words. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016
    Thank you. The guy deserved what he got. It was a lot cheaper than divorce.
reply by kathleenspalding on 05-Jun-2016
    LOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!
Comment from l.raven
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OMG I guess you don't mess with a witch...but I can't tell you how many times I wish I were one...LOL...very well written...love your story told...and a great picture...

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016
    Thank you. Sometimes I would have loved to know witchcraft too.
reply by l.raven on 04-Jun-2016
    you are so very welcome...xxoo Linda
Comment from zekeziemann
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i'm not sure I understand the story, but it held this old timer's interest. You got in all the words and they did not seem forced. Good job.
Zeke

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016
    Thank you. Just a witch's way of disposing of a bad husband. It is cheaper than divorce. LOL
Comment from aryr
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This is absolutely fantastic. It was well written and was easy to read. It did meet the contest criteria. It was witty and entertaining. I wonder though if you consider karma. Anyway great writing, good luck.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
    Thank you. Yep, I always consider karma. Glad you liked the story.
reply by aryr on 03-Jun-2016
    You are most welcome. May I ask if you are a witch? If you are too uncomfortable to answer I truly understand.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016
    No, I'm not a witch. I would like to be sometimes.
reply by aryr on 04-Jun-2016
    LOL I think there are a lot of people with that thought. Again good luck.
Comment from nassus1957
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The author complied with the requirements of the contest and was successful in combining the elements which make a story effective in delivering the message of the writer. The scary elements were appropriate and the story progressed smoothly in so few words. Good job.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
    Thank you. It is a challenge to write these short-short stories but I love it.