Self-Righteous Christian Bigots
An essence poem-contest entry10 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
How did I miss this? I am 100% in agreement with the content of this poem and with your author's notes - as to the poem itself = no wonder it won. It's brilliant. I am SO GLAD it won. Gives me hope.
***at least ONE HUNDRED OF THESE, and that little yellow cross...*********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************!!!
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
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How did I miss this? I am 100% in agreement with the content of this poem and with your author's notes - as to the poem itself = no wonder it won. It's brilliant. I am SO GLAD it won. Gives me hope.
***at least ONE HUNDRED OF THESE, and that little yellow cross...*********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************!!!
Comment Written 30-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
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It was a blind contest, so no notification. :))
I'm so pleased you liked it. I thought I'd be reamed, but it went over well. I guess I'm not alone. LOL
Thanks a bunch. mikey
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My pleasure!
Comment from Liberty Justice
Five 5 stars. Well, this person has an angry determined-look. Seems he wants his opinion known and his voice heard and not going to take no for an answer.
Great inner and outer rhymes. Check mine out also. Thanks! liberty justice
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Five 5 stars. Well, this person has an angry determined-look. Seems he wants his opinion known and his voice heard and not going to take no for an answer.
Great inner and outer rhymes. Check mine out also. Thanks! liberty justice
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Great take on my piece. Thanks so much. I'll be by soon. :))
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Help me find a literary agent
to help me publish my writings.
I need list Good publishers
newsp mags tv etc. liberty
justice
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I don't know a lot, but I'll look into it. Maybe I'll learn something to. :)) mikey
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Thanks dear poet. Check mine out, also. Good luck contest
Comment from I am Cat
I believe that you are correct. ;)
Unfortunately, there are so many who purport to be religious and in the name of their god, they judge others. It's a huge turn off for those who are still seeking, or questioning their own beliefs... therefore, taking different turns in the road. ;)
Well done Mikey, if all people were like you... churches would be full at all times. ;)
Great job
Cat
good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 26-May-2016
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I believe that you are correct. ;)
Unfortunately, there are so many who purport to be religious and in the name of their god, they judge others. It's a huge turn off for those who are still seeking, or questioning their own beliefs... therefore, taking different turns in the road. ;)
Well done Mikey, if all people were like you... churches would be full at all times. ;)
Great job
Cat
good luck in the contest
Comment Written 26-May-2016
reply by the author on 26-May-2016
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You're so right about empty churches. These people do religion no favours with their judgments. I walked into the church I go to know and their was a chick preacher and a couple lesbian deacons. All the old ladies were running their fingers through my silver locks. I knew I was home. HAHAHA! That's a church Jesus was dig.
Thanks for the great review. I'm around and not ignoring anyone. Just a little break, I'll be reviewing and stuff soon. Reading though. You're on a good roll. Keep it up. Mr. ANON!!
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Writing an essence poem is no easy task and yet you have managed to write a very good one. Your six syllables on both lines come together perfectly to tell a very firm message on the negatives of not having a kinder heart and walking the darker path. Excellent read. Best of luck in the competition. ~DD
reply by the author on 23-May-2016
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Writing an essence poem is no easy task and yet you have managed to write a very good one. Your six syllables on both lines come together perfectly to tell a very firm message on the negatives of not having a kinder heart and walking the darker path. Excellent read. Best of luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 23-May-2016
reply by the author on 23-May-2016
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Thanks a million, DD
Most appreciated. :))
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Mike,
I voted for you and so did 7 other people. You are winning!
Your religious beliefs are identical to mine, you copy cat. lol, I can totally see JC loving gay couples as much as any other couple in love and in a committed relationship.
What can I say, when you are right you are right? This poem could not be any more correct than it is.
I feel so intensely about this that it's hard to keep my emotions and my rational thinking apart.
You read my commentary about LGBT rights and celebration. You know how I feel about this issue.
Great job with the essence poem. I have never seen one before. It is more complicated than most people think. The same with haiku.
I had a bad morning but my day got better. I am all spent out, though. I feel like a deflated balloon. Nice.
*gypsy hugs*
reply by the author on 23-May-2016
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Hello, Mike,
I voted for you and so did 7 other people. You are winning!
Your religious beliefs are identical to mine, you copy cat. lol, I can totally see JC loving gay couples as much as any other couple in love and in a committed relationship.
What can I say, when you are right you are right? This poem could not be any more correct than it is.
I feel so intensely about this that it's hard to keep my emotions and my rational thinking apart.
You read my commentary about LGBT rights and celebration. You know how I feel about this issue.
Great job with the essence poem. I have never seen one before. It is more complicated than most people think. The same with haiku.
I had a bad morning but my day got better. I am all spent out, though. I feel like a deflated balloon. Nice.
*gypsy hugs*
Comment Written 23-May-2016
reply by the author on 23-May-2016
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Usually the more simple beliefs are, the more correct they are.
Love each other and treat each other well seems simple enough and I think it works really well too. Yeah, these short forms are rough when it comes to saying something. But it can be done and when it is done, it can be powerful. Thanks so much. Hugs back.
Comment from AnnaLinda
Poet,
You have a strong title and Large presentation.
I see you have the out/shout end rhyme and
the all/small internal rhyme as well as the
required 6 syllables per line.
My only thought on this is that a picture
of Jesus over turning the money changer's
tables in the temple might be more appropriate
for your message. Otherwise it seems like you
are casting stones as well.
Nothing wrong with your message...I think it
is a presentation thing with me.
Linda
reply by the author on 23-May-2016
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Poet,
You have a strong title and Large presentation.
I see you have the out/shout end rhyme and
the all/small internal rhyme as well as the
required 6 syllables per line.
My only thought on this is that a picture
of Jesus over turning the money changer's
tables in the temple might be more appropriate
for your message. Otherwise it seems like you
are casting stones as well.
Nothing wrong with your message...I think it
is a presentation thing with me.
Linda
Comment Written 22-May-2016
reply by the author on 23-May-2016
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Thank you, Linda
I think you make an excellent point and it gives me pause for thought. I'll consider it. That would be a striking image and you may be right, it does support what my meaning is better. Thanks for the insights and thoughtful read. :))
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Of course...I'm glad you are not offended:) Good luck!
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Oh, so much agreed. Sitting in church every Sunday does not make you a Christian by any means. It is how you treat others throughout the week that matters. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 23-May-2016
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Oh, so much agreed. Sitting in church every Sunday does not make you a Christian by any means. It is how you treat others throughout the week that matters. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 22-May-2016
reply by the author on 23-May-2016
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We agree totally. I think if we all treat each other the right way, that solves everything. :))
Comment from enitsalemap
This is a good poem, concise, to the point, with a clear point of view. I think you are right about what Christian beliefs ought to be. Not judgement, that is for sure. You followed the rules for the form and should be in the running for this contest.
reply by the author on 23-May-2016
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This is a good poem, concise, to the point, with a clear point of view. I think you are right about what Christian beliefs ought to be. Not judgement, that is for sure. You followed the rules for the form and should be in the running for this contest.
Comment Written 22-May-2016
reply by the author on 23-May-2016
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What a great review. We agree. I like to keep it simple. god knows I'm no one to judge, so I just keep a low profile and hope I sneak in somehow. LOL Thanks so much.
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you are welcome.
Comment from Winslow
Dear Jackie,
There are bigots no matter the group for the self-righteous are all about. A true Christian I believe is one who is capable of tolerance and love.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 23-May-2016
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Dear Jackie,
There are bigots no matter the group for the self-righteous are all about. A true Christian I believe is one who is capable of tolerance and love.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 22-May-2016
reply by the author on 23-May-2016
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Well, Winslow, we are certainly on the same page. I couldn't agree more. Funny how simple it is. Thanks so much. :))
Comment from Dean Kuch
Judge not lest ye be judged in kind. That's what I was always taught while growing up. Sin is sin, and no one sin is any better or worse than any other. No matter how you might wanna sugar coat your sin (not YOU, author, but people in general), it's still sin in God's eyes.
reply by the author on 23-May-2016
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Judge not lest ye be judged in kind. That's what I was always taught while growing up. Sin is sin, and no one sin is any better or worse than any other. No matter how you might wanna sugar coat your sin (not YOU, author, but people in general), it's still sin in God's eyes.
Comment Written 22-May-2016
reply by the author on 23-May-2016
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We're totally on the same page, Dean. No surprise. Thanks a million. Anon
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Good to know, and you're so welcome.
~Dean :)
