Summer's eve
Septolet21 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A well-written Septolet poem. A great message carried over in a few words. A great photo to compliment your poem. Good luck with the contest.
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A well-written Septolet poem. A great message carried over in a few words. A great photo to compliment your poem. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 25-May-2016
Comment from Briergate
This is bliss to read. I love the carefully-chosen words which all complement each other, and the mellow theme and imagery. A great entry for the competition, and a real pleasure to read.
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This is bliss to read. I love the carefully-chosen words which all complement each other, and the mellow theme and imagery. A great entry for the competition, and a real pleasure to read.
Comment Written 25-May-2016
Comment from tony bronk
I seem to find myself in conflict with your premise of your poem i.e. the whiffs of "floral scent suffuse", but, that has nothing at all to do with the quality of your poem, which is an excellent, well metered poem, and vividly visual. Tony Bronk
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I seem to find myself in conflict with your premise of your poem i.e. the whiffs of "floral scent suffuse", but, that has nothing at all to do with the quality of your poem, which is an excellent, well metered poem, and vividly visual. Tony Bronk
Comment Written 25-May-2016
Comment from DonandVicki
Wait, wait! I'm not ready for spring to be over yet. I can feel the heat of summer and the longer days. You have captured all of this with your short poem.
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Wait, wait! I'm not ready for spring to be over yet. I can feel the heat of summer and the longer days. You have captured all of this with your short poem.
Comment Written 25-May-2016
Comment from mfowler
So short, yet so lyrical. I'm afraid all I have is a virtual sixer to offer. This is just lovely. Firstly, the opening stanza give us the hints of summer (not here) and portents of floral displays. Secondly, you announce it's here, or nearly. Just great word choices. They make it.
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So short, yet so lyrical. I'm afraid all I have is a virtual sixer to offer. This is just lovely. Firstly, the opening stanza give us the hints of summer (not here) and portents of floral displays. Secondly, you announce it's here, or nearly. Just great word choices. They make it.
Comment Written 25-May-2016
Comment from JLC EmeraldRiver
This is a lovely poem that pleasantly welcomes the coming of summer, which is particularly fitting for this time of year. In just a few lines, you paint a full picture of nature and portray a lighthearted theme, and you make a good use of alliteration in the both stanzas. Well done!
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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This is a lovely poem that pleasantly welcomes the coming of summer, which is particularly fitting for this time of year. In just a few lines, you paint a full picture of nature and portray a lighthearted theme, and you make a good use of alliteration in the both stanzas. Well done!
Comment Written 24-May-2016
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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Thank you for such a positive review zanya
Comment from Kaydoe
This was an enjoyable Septolet Poem, with great imagery, going from spring into summer. The picture goes well with the poem. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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This was an enjoyable Septolet Poem, with great imagery, going from spring into summer. The picture goes well with the poem. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 24-May-2016
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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Thank you for a great review zanya
Comment from Marykelly
The imagery of spring is evident in these very few words and the promise of summer is also included. The word sojourn is perfect for describing summer. In a very few words you have created an image and combined them in the two parts of the poem. well done
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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The imagery of spring is evident in these very few words and the promise of summer is also included. The word sojourn is perfect for describing summer. In a very few words you have created an image and combined them in the two parts of the poem. well done
Comment Written 24-May-2016
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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Simply wonderful review - thank you for reading zanya
Comment from heyjude
Mystery writer, I really like the part about whiffs of
floral scent suffuse.... Good alliteration in summer's
sweet sojourn. Great picture you found to go with it.
Good luck in this contest.
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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Mystery writer, I really like the part about whiffs of
floral scent suffuse.... Good alliteration in summer's
sweet sojourn. Great picture you found to go with it.
Good luck in this contest.
Comment Written 23-May-2016
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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Thanks for reading and the encouraging review zanya
Comment from nancyjam
Good word choice to convey the coming
of summer as spring fades with the blossoms.
Nice use of alliteration and assonance.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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Good word choice to convey the coming
of summer as spring fades with the blossoms.
Nice use of alliteration and assonance.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 23-May-2016
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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Thank you for a superb review zanya
