Comment from Magpiemazy.

Excellent

Awesome 100-word flash fiction. Hope you will take it to another level and bring the monster to forefront in another version of it. It's rare to get the chills in a story this short, but your story had them dancing up and down my arms.

 Comment Written 21-May-2016

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reply by the author on 22-May-2016

Thank you so much for this great review.. I'm so pleased that you liked it. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from alexisleech

Exceptional

Well done, Ulla! Writing flash fiction is really hard, but you have managed to keep the tension bubbling away with every word.

I wouldn't change a thing, and I'm delighted that I have a six left to give!

Alexis xxx

 Comment Written 21-May-2016

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reply by the author on 22-May-2016

Hi Alexis, and thanks so much for reading this, Your great feed back means a lot to me, as you know.All the best. Ulla xxx

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A well-written scary nightmare story. When a person gets in such a situation it feels like you are in another world. Can't move properly and it all ends with a scream.

 Comment Written 21-May-2016

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reply by the author on 22-May-2016

Hi Sandra, thanks ever so much I'm so pleased that you liked it. All the best. Ulla:)

Comment from RPSaxena

Exceptional

Hello Ulla,
Interesting piece of Horror and Thriller Flash Fiction meeting all the required norms and beautifully depicting its theme!
Wording is impressive and perfectly matching the theme.
Smooth and captivating flow from the beginning to the end.
Picture enhances the impact of story.
Best of Luck!

 Comment Written 21-May-2016

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reply by the author on 22-May-2016

Hi RPSaxena, thank you so very much for the review and your rating. Your continuing support means so much to me. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from bookishfabler

Excellent

I pasted this to my word and got 102 words. But then I counted myself and got exactly 100. Go figure. Anyway, this was a fun read. Not as gory as I thought from the warning.

a couple of nits which wouldn't change the count,

Bathed in cold sweat(,) she felt the adrenaline coursing through her body

the moon-light casting (cast) eerie shadows

Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
hugs Heidi

 Comment Written 21-May-2016

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reply by the author on 22-May-2016

Thanks a lot Heidi. Much appreciated. All the best. Ulla:)

Comment from Mary Wakeford

Excellent

These are so intriguing to read considering the challenge to complete in 100 words, especially for me who seems to drift toward being overly wordy in my writing.

With that said, you've achieved a great buildup and suspenseful read. Well Done, Ulla.

 Comment Written 21-May-2016

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reply by the author on 22-May-2016

Hi Mary, Thank you so much for this great review. Really appreciated. All the best Ulla:)))

Comment from sage17611

Excellent

Your story denotes the feeling of impending doom. Very imaginative, it takes the reader to the scene feeling the fear of someone inside the house approaching our bedroom door. How scary, that's a true nightmare. Very well written, good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 21-May-2016

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reply by the author on 22-May-2016

Thank you so much for your great review. I'm glad I managed to convey some sort of terror. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from Winslow

Excellent

Dear Ulla,

Who knows who might come knocking at your door? Put the iron bar across and fortify its beams, a monster just came calling and now you are gone. Great story although a little brief. (LOL)

Warm regards,

Winslow

 Comment Written 20-May-2016

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reply by the author on 22-May-2016

Thanks so much. You are absolutely right. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from Unspoken94

Excellent

You did it as far as I'm concerned. An excellent telling
of a story in 100 words or less. This took some work
and you deserve it in the contest. -Bill

 Comment Written 20-May-2016

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reply by the author on 22-May-2016

Thanks a lot for this great review, which contains a lot of praise. I'm so pleased. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from CivilChick

Excellent

Well, that was certainly a terrifying 100 words. You did an great job scaring me is just a few sentences...and you left no room for hope at the end!

 Comment Written 20-May-2016

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reply by the author on 22-May-2016

Thanks ever so much. Very appreciated. I'm glad you liked it. All the best. Ulla:))