Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

A most splendid piece of poetry and entry to the contest being held. You expressed friendship in a truly spectacular way. Fabulous.

 Comment Written 18-May-2016

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reply by the author on 19-May-2016

Hi Foxangie, I am so pleased you thought this splendid and i Thank you very much for your lovely review. So Cheers my friend

Comment from Lisa Deverick

Excellent

Trust and respect are vital in any true friendship. I would add to that loyalty. You chose good words for this naani poem. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 17-May-2016

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reply by the author on 17-May-2016

Hi Lisa, yes loyalty and love could also be included and so many more words. This hopefully represent the circle of friendship and I thank you for your review and good luck message . Cheers

Comment from ~Dovey

Excellent

Hello Poet,

Your Naani is written in four lines and twenty-five syllables, as prescribed by the form itself. You've chosen the subject of friendship, which certainly embraces the human relations aspect. Presented in two colors and without artwork completes the requirements as outlined in the contest guidelines.

I would agree that trust and respect are two extremely important aspects of friendship.

Good luck in the contest.

Kim

 Comment Written 17-May-2016

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reply by the author on 17-May-2016

Hi Kim. Many Thanks for your review and comments much appreciated. There are many words to describe a friendship and trust and respect I believe are two key elements and I tried to complete this as a circle of frienship. Cheers for your good luck message.

Comment from Kazzawin

Excellent

A clever and well thought out poem.
I love the way each line is linked to the previous line and how it still maintains its flow and meaning.

In just a few words you have demonstrated how important and special true friendship is.

I wish you well in the contest : )

 Comment Written 16-May-2016

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reply by the author on 16-May-2016

Hi Kazzawin. A circle of friendship was my intention and I am pleased you thought it clever and well though out. I try and appreciate your comments Cheers for a great day

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Excellent theme and so true.

With respect, maybe avoid 'respect' repetition and add another level by subbing, 'respect', in 3rd line with, 'in truth'. This also adds alliteration with, 'trust/truth'.

You still have repeated, 'trust' which can be a 'waste' with so few words available, but I think it works here.

Nice one.

Good luck and best wishes, Ray.

 Comment Written 16-May-2016

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reply by the author on 16-May-2016

Hi Ray,, Thanks so much for reading and commenting on my poem. With this I have tried to keep the same words repeating as to create the cirle of friendship, I know there are many other words i could have used but it wanted to keep it to these. I do however appreciate your suggestion and please always feel to give them to me. Many Cheers for your good luck wishes

reply by Domino 2 on 16-May-2016

Thanks for your very kind and gracious reply.

reply by the author on 16-May-2016

Your very welcome Ray

Comment from Toneyear

Excellent

This is nice. Perfect structure and following of the rules, exquisite flow of words. I did enjoy the poem and a wonderful subject to write about, which all you said is very true. Thank you for sharing. Tina

 Comment Written 16-May-2016

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reply by the author on 16-May-2016

Hi Tina . I am glad you enjoyed my Naani. and thank you for your encouraging comments and yes I believe trust and respect are two key elements in any friendship. Cheers for a great day

Comment from rbutner

Excellent

I like the way this work creates a circle, and friendship is often represented by a circle (a friendships ring, clasped hands, etc). This is beautiful. I enjoyed it very much. It has a very nice flow as well.

 Comment Written 16-May-2016

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reply by the author on 16-May-2016

Hi rbutner. So pleased you picked up my circle of frienship and thought it beautiful , just like any great friendship. Many Thanks for you great comments ,Cheers

Comment from tony bronk

Excellent

You've said just about everything that comprises friendship with the amount of words allowed. You did well in making it comprehensible. Excellent poem. Tony Bronk

 Comment Written 16-May-2016

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reply by the author on 16-May-2016

Hi Tony, I do appreciate your time and lovely review for my Naani. Trust and respect are very important to any friendship. Thanks so much for reading this for me Cheers

Comment from Helen Bach

Excellent

The words wisdom and truth came to mind as I read your poem. This is a little gem that takes us full circle beginning and ending with friendship.

I loved your excellent naani and wish you well in the contest. I will look out for when the voting starts. Good luck.

 Comment Written 16-May-2016

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reply by the author on 16-May-2016

Hi Helen, Thanks you very much for reading this and for your lovely comments. I tried to make it like a circle of friendship with my repeating words and glad you loved it Many Cheers for you support

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Yes, friendship and trust go hand in hand. One cannot experience the depth of true friendship with someone that you do not trust. A Naani with a strong message for us all.

 Comment Written 16-May-2016

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reply by the author on 16-May-2016

Hi tfawcus. Very true and many thanks for reading and giving this a review. I am pleased you liked my Naani. with Cheers for a great day