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Lifetime

We Remember The Darndest Things

4 total reviews 
Comment from foxangie123
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I really liked how you expressed the reality of seeing something and ignoring it, misconstruing it, or bringing it as reality and the choice to correct or make different. Way to go. The part about memories or fact I was confused on as memories are fact since one saw it?

 Comment Written 24-May-2016


reply by the author on 25-May-2016
    changed the note
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
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I don't believe you meet the minimal requirements of the Free-form Poetry contest. There is too much rhyme throughout the piece. I did enjoy it and read it twice to get the full flavor; however, as I said, it is not really free-form in style. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 23-May-2016


reply by the author on 25-May-2016
    thanks for the update
Comment from johnwilson
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This piece is intelligent and insightful. The rhyming works in some places and is strained in others. Having said that, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I liked the way you compared our being a guest here, in God's way, with the rodeo. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.

 Comment Written 15-May-2016


reply by the author on 15-May-2016
    so glad you like this
Comment from Dr. Nad
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Lifetime is a nice free Form Poetry contest entry. You have taken several areas of nature and the human experience and amalgamated them into a poem that reminds us that life is good. . I liked the way you like and our lives to a rodeo rider's experience. It sure does feel like writing a bucking bronco some days, doesn't it? LOL thanks for sharing. May God bless you!

 Comment Written 14-May-2016


reply by the author on 15-May-2016
    so glad you enjoyed this thanks for the nice complement
reply by Dr. Nad on 16-May-2016
    You are most welcome.
    Embrace the love from above!