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Comment from Toneyear
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Hello. What a wonderful subject to write about. The form of the poem is great and the rhyme is done well. Thank you for sharing. Tina

 Comment Written 16-May-2016


reply by the author on 16-May-2016
    Hi Tina, Thanks so much for your review . This was written for the Naani contest but somehow it didn't make it into the contest however I do appreciate your review and lovely comments many Cheers to you Christine😃
Comment from Bill Schott
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Nice play on words, 'Graani'. This naani has the required word limit and is fun to include in a collection of poems that those grandkids can read twenty years from and know that they were loved.

 Comment Written 15-May-2016


reply by the author on 15-May-2016
    Hi Bill. thanks so much for your review and lovely comments. Yes I hope one day they may read my work and they are very loved Cheers Naani LOL
reply by the author on 15-May-2016
    Hi Bill. thanks so much for your review and lovely comments. Yes I hope one day they may read my work and they are very loved Cheers Naani LOL
Comment from evilynne
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You may be lucky and your grandkids are luck to have you as their "nanni". Your little verse is really adorable and fun to read. Evi

 Comment Written 14-May-2016


reply by the author on 15-May-2016
    Hi Evi. Thank so much for reading and reviewing my naani, yes I am lucky to have 4 beautiful granddaughters and couldn't resist the nannie/naani challenge Cheers Christine
Comment from lightink
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Very cute! Four girls, that sounds like a noisy little pink crowd! ;) I bet you have some fun baking time! Lovely poem about something so universal, yet very gratifying: being a proud grandma!

 Comment Written 14-May-2016


reply by the author on 15-May-2016
    Hi lightink. Thanks so much for your review and yes I do have fun with the pink crowd LOL. from a very proud Nannie. many Cheers for your lovely comments Cheers Christine
Comment from foxangie123
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This is most magnificent. My grands call me Nanny a southern thing although it sounds like I am hired help:). This is clever and creative indeed. Very nice.

 Comment Written 14-May-2016


reply by the author on 15-May-2016
    Hi Angie, I had a bit off fun with this one as the prompt was for a naani this just popped into my head LOL but yes they are so cute. Many Cheers for you read and review x Cheers Christine
Comment from tony bronk
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A very cute, quaint poem about being "grannie" and how much you love being so. I'm happy for you, and it's your right to write about it. good poem. Tony Bronk wisconsin

 Comment Written 14-May-2016


reply by the author on 15-May-2016
    Hi Tony, Many thanks for your supportive review and I am glad you thought it cute and good. How can one resist this type of challenge LOL Cheers my friend Christine
Comment from heyjude
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Chrissy, I love this. You wrote a naani and said you are a Nannie.
How cute. Right on with your syllable count for the naani.
We do love our grandkids.

 Comment Written 14-May-2016


reply by the author on 15-May-2016
    Hi Jude. Ha Ha, couldn't resist this naani from a Nannie and yes we do love our grandies, mine are delightful and make such a difference to my life (which is great anyway but they are the cream on top) Thanks for reading this Cheers Christine
Comment from misscookie
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I can relate to your poem or should I say that feeling.
The first time I became a Nanny I had mixed emotion would you believe guilt
I've a grandma for many year and now I must surrender my title to my daughter who is was a grandma for the first time
I saw the same glow and on her face, that sparkle in her eyes. Them I realize being a Nanny is another great blessing God granted me to see.
Welcome to the club of Nannies
Cookie

 Comment Written 14-May-2016


reply by the author on 15-May-2016
    Hi Cookie, Yes I was 52 when I became a grandmother and I can still recall the day of her birth it was thrilling but a bit daunting also all of a sudden there is another generation and make one sit back and take notice then there were 3 more (all girls from my daughter), but I love it and they are all so special. So you are a great grandmother congratulations. Thanks for reading my naani Cheers Christine
reply by misscookie on 15-May-2016
    You're very welcome
    Peace God be with you
    Cookie
reply by the author on 15-May-2016
    You too x
reply by misscookie on 15-May-2016
    We are truly bless, have a nice Sunday.
    Cookie
Comment from William Ross
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very nice a naani for a nannie very good, enjoy those grandbabies, nice job on this and good luck with this have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 14-May-2016


reply by the author on 15-May-2016
    Hi William, Thank for your lovely review and yes I do enjoy their company we have so much fun. They let me be a kid again LOL Cheer muchly Christine
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hi Chrissie, good play on words in this naani. Well Grannie, I am also lucky with 3 granddaughters and 4 grandsons, and they call me Nana, pretty close to naani LOL. Amusing naani and a good read in abab rhyme. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 14-May-2016


reply by the author on 15-May-2016
    Hi Dorothy. Tank you very much for your lovely review and six star rating I am stoked. I couldn't resist the pun of a naani from a nannie LOL glad you enjoyed this and I do so appreciate all you support Cheers my friend Christinex