Comment from djeckert

Excellent

ha, a neat entry, sure fits todays world. the likes of ebay and Amazon can be a beautiful thing for sure. Good luck in the contest. God Blesses

 Comment Written 09-May-2016

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reply by the author on 09-May-2016

thank you, I like in depth emotional stuff, but decided to try this any way. Very out of my comfort zone, but I like the fact that check has more than one meeting. Check a box, Check a hockey player, Write a check. So I decided to go for it. Also , Box has more than one meaning. Check the Box on a table. Or after it is paid for by a check , to fill up the box with an order.

reply by the author on 10-May-2016

Thank you, I think Karma is the best one in the contest

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

OK - a pun is good! Of course, this one wouldn't work for me as here in the Antipodes, we write cheques! Actually, we don't any more! Everything is done on-line or using the plastic.

 Comment Written 09-May-2016

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reply by the author on 09-May-2016

oh , heavens, are these poems suppose to have major emotions. I don't get them, but the challenge was great and I love that i can put something up and not be afraid.

reply by tfawcus on 09-May-2016

God forbid! A bit of humour such as in yours is preferable any time! LOL

reply by the author on 10-May-2016

Thank you I think Karma is the best one in the contest.