Comment from schatzling

Excellent

I just wanted to thank you for utilizing my drawing to accompany your poem.

I enjoyed reading it very much.

It is a PERFECT PRAYER indeed.

 Comment Written 16-May-2016

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reply by the author on 16-May-2016

Wow, you drew that beautiful piece of art? That is one of my very favorites. You have an amazing talent.

reply by schatzling on 16-May-2016

Thank you for that compliment.
I just went through most of your portfolio. I read over half of what you have written....probably more like 3/4s of what you have written.....If anyone has talent....IT IS YOU. Thank you for sharing EVERYTHING that you have in your writing(s). I look forward to going back and reading the rest when I have some more time to do so.

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

A very sweet and appropriate prayer, indeed. Would be great to use in a little book of children's prayers. Well written and much enjoyed.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016

thank you so much, I love the simplicity. I also wish all of us believed we would see God when we woke up each day.

Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Judy, this is a really cute poem and well done for the 5-7-5
poetry contest. Children can say the most marvelous things
even at such a young age. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016

oh yes, and they say it so truthfully and lovingly, and most of all simply.

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

wouldn't get so stressed on syllabic count but its 5-7-5 poetry so it must be the discipline hey nice read thanks for sharing

dip

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

did it not have the right syllables? I am confused.

reply by DR DIP on 23-Apr-2016

no idea i don't follow syllabic count...ever lol
xdip

Comment from John Parkin

Excellent

How succinct in describing a simple act of faith. I will always remember your words. Sometimes when I Pray I get carried away. I will use your words and thanks.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016

thank you so much. I will also try to look for god in the morning. We make things to complicated.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

This a lovely little poem that has taught the child to say its prayer. Well, that was the common thing to do in my childhood. Don't think it did much good though! LoL. well penned. All the best. Ulla:)

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016

Thank you Ulla, I always enjoy hearing from you

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

This is a simple but perfect little poem. It shows what it means with no frills or excessive explanation's I liked the drawing as well and wish I had some sixes left. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016

Thank you so much. I love the simplicity.

Comment from Aussie

Exceptional

Best wishes for your contest entry; loved the sketch that complimented your little poem I think we all remember our prayers of childhood. Good night God, beautiful. Thanks for sharing and yes, I am writing my story for you. Blessings, Kay.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016

I am so glad you are writing your story. Good night god see you in the morning.

Comment from winnona

Excellent

Absolutely adorable poem. That so sounds like what a little person would say to god. So short and matter of fact. You could not have chosen better artwork to complete the poem. Very well written.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016

thank you . Such simplicity. I wish we would all look for god when we get up in the morning.

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, Judy. Yeah, at first I questioned the word "prayer" syllable count but made up my mind it was two.

You are right...it is a sweet and sincere poem. I can just picture a small child saying it.

Good luck in the contest. I think it is the winner! Bob

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016

thank you we will see, but I have already learned here at Fan Story, that is not about a win , but letting yourself write. That is why we ar heat.

reply by Mastery on 21-Apr-2016

Yes.......but a win once in a while is nice. Bob