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Spring

After a relatively warm winter, spring has sprung.

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Comment from I am Cat
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A lovely poem... the acrostic gets 'lost' inside the beauty of the poem, which I think is the point. ;)
well done and congratulations on your win in the contest. ;)
Cat

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2016

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
    Thank you so much for your kind words.I am overcome with my shared win.
Comment from VaV-VOOM
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Nice poem, and I am glad I take the time to vote on these contests. They are all so fun to read. Thank you so much for sharing, and good luck. Write On! VaV-VOOM

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my creations. I have fun and will write on..
reply by VaV-VOOM on 25-Apr-2016
    Your so welcome, VaV-VOOM!
Comment from brownies
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Beautiful! I felt like taking a deep breath in and exhaling relaxation. Not easy to do in so few words and lines. Did you mean dasied or daisy'd grass? I was confused by that but still very much amused by the vision! Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016

reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
    Thank you so much for your encouraging review. I have corrected the daisy section.
Comment from robyn corum
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A lovely poem and perfect acrostic displaying the beauty of spring with all of its wonderful glories! Good luck in the contest. Only one small note:

1.) Golden carpet in da(i)sied grass

Thanks!

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016

reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
    Thank you so much for that spelling correction. I did have a concern there