Prosetry
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Comment from schatzling
Great use of words For better or for verse....how clever that is.
I got a smile on my face and I am thinking of you.....can imagine you typing away with this and smiling yourself as you just click click click away on the keyboard....this writing is just coming out of you so quickly that you cannot keep up with your thoughts....your fingers working slower than you wish them too....but you got it done....no edits. Perfect the way it.....WELL okay, maybe just one small change (SMILE).
Thanks for sharing.
This is great.
On another note: question for you....so you think I should just write something; start somewhere in the middle and just go for it....not waiting for a special contest....just post a writing.....of what kind? Can you give me that extra little push....I always get extra nervous when I sit and want to write...then I don't and instead I come and read your writing and give your Reviews.
Thanks in advance!!!!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016
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Great use of words For better or for verse....how clever that is.
I got a smile on my face and I am thinking of you.....can imagine you typing away with this and smiling yourself as you just click click click away on the keyboard....this writing is just coming out of you so quickly that you cannot keep up with your thoughts....your fingers working slower than you wish them too....but you got it done....no edits. Perfect the way it.....WELL okay, maybe just one small change (SMILE).
Thanks for sharing.
This is great.
On another note: question for you....so you think I should just write something; start somewhere in the middle and just go for it....not waiting for a special contest....just post a writing.....of what kind? Can you give me that extra little push....I always get extra nervous when I sit and want to write...then I don't and instead I come and read your writing and give your Reviews.
Thanks in advance!!!!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2016
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HOnestly. Print out all of the responses you have been writing to me. Some of them truly read like a biography. Then start from one of those points. You told me about having your twins. That story was fascinating. You told me about your grand parents. Now after you read independence day you told me the truth about your mother. She hurt you so much. That would be a story in itself. Now go back and re read what you have written to me. YOU Will be amazed. Begin today.
Comment from damommy
I just found this. It's great. Very good rhyme and meter, and the picture is too cute for words.
Don't worry too much about where you "fit." You fit right here, writing away. Write what you like to write, and your fans will always be there for you. 8-)
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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I just found this. It's great. Very good rhyme and meter, and the picture is too cute for words.
Don't worry too much about where you "fit." You fit right here, writing away. Write what you like to write, and your fans will always be there for you. 8-)
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. I think I have found a way to write and love it. You are a treasure to me.
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Relax and enjoy. You have fans. 8-)
Comment from tony bronk
A very witty, clever, "real" poem that is catchy as well. I was happy to be reading it with my funny bone! I'm sure that it was your intent. But also, I sensed a sincerity to your dilemma, which at least, you're not pulling your hair out over at least. An excellent write! Have a happy day!1 Tony
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016
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A very witty, clever, "real" poem that is catchy as well. I was happy to be reading it with my funny bone! I'm sure that it was your intent. But also, I sensed a sincerity to your dilemma, which at least, you're not pulling your hair out over at least. An excellent write! Have a happy day!1 Tony
Comment Written 15-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. It is a true dilemma. I appreciate you reading it.
Comment from sunnilicious
Chalk it up to free verse and let everybody talk what they may or might. I like how you voiced yourself in this poem. Nicely written. Expressive. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Nice work
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2016
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Chalk it up to free verse and let everybody talk what they may or might. I like how you voiced yourself in this poem. Nicely written. Expressive. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Nice work
Comment Written 14-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2016
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thank you so much , I have learned more on Fan Story than I ever learned in school..
Comment from dmt1967
I am afraid to say this is not free verse lol. The flow is good, though and I am not one for labels. If it is good it is good lol. A poet is A poet even if no one knows it lol. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2016
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I am afraid to say this is not free verse lol. The flow is good, though and I am not one for labels. If it is good it is good lol. A poet is A poet even if no one knows it lol. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2016
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The rest of the book is free verse, the first piece explains why I wrote it. Thank you so much. You are right the first poem is definitely a poem. lol. Enjoyed your comments.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Judy. This is great. Hmmmm! Which slot does my work fit into? I think we all have that dilemma from time to time. No doubt about it, though, this one is gem no matter whatucallit. Marilyn
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2016
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Hi Judy. This is great. Hmmmm! Which slot does my work fit into? I think we all have that dilemma from time to time. No doubt about it, though, this one is gem no matter whatucallit. Marilyn
Comment Written 14-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2016
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thank you it was a fun write. I receive wonderful reviews who also tell me that it is in the wrong category. They aren't mean about it. It's just what they think. So I will continue to write to the rhyme or not rhyme of the day.
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You're the poet or the prose writer, so you get to decide. Actually, a category for prosetry is a great idea. Marilyn
Comment from Rubylou
I enjoyed this write very much. I read it as a poem with rhyming quatrains in abcb pattern.
You bring out a great point about a writer's dilemma and what category a piece belongs in.
I just write and accept people's thought and opinions which are most often helpful and constructive but once in a while, well... LOL
Thanks for sharing,
Rubylou
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2016
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I enjoyed this write very much. I read it as a poem with rhyming quatrains in abcb pattern.
You bring out a great point about a writer's dilemma and what category a piece belongs in.
I just write and accept people's thought and opinions which are most often helpful and constructive but once in a while, well... LOL
Thanks for sharing,
Rubylou
Comment Written 14-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2016
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I do too. I just write what comes out. Sometimes with rhyme sometimes without . I appreciate your review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi jusylee, this is really good and indeed poetry, no doubt about that. Love the artwork you chose to accompany this marvelous plea for another category. Your words and the art work are hilarious together. Well done Love it, and I'm still smiling. Wish I had a six. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2016
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Hi jusylee, this is really good and indeed poetry, no doubt about that. Love the artwork you chose to accompany this marvelous plea for another category. Your words and the art work are hilarious together. Well done Love it, and I'm still smiling. Wish I had a six. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 14-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much, Yes , I write in Prosetry. and I guess that's ok. lol
Comment from Helen Bach
Excellent. Great fun and you say what many of us feel. It is so well written, self effacing and with aplomb. I think any contest using this as a prompt would attract a lot of interest. Well done and I shall be using "prosetry" in my vocabulary from now on. Deserves nothing less than six stars for creating a valid new genre for writing. Really enjoyed your poem.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2016
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Excellent. Great fun and you say what many of us feel. It is so well written, self effacing and with aplomb. I think any contest using this as a prompt would attract a lot of interest. Well done and I shall be using "prosetry" in my vocabulary from now on. Deserves nothing less than six stars for creating a valid new genre for writing. Really enjoyed your poem.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2016
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Helen, you touch my heart and my writing. I so appreciate it. Writing doesn't always need guide lines, Though I do appreciate traditional poetry. Maybe we just need to write and see how it sounds. Thank you so deeply for your comments.
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You are most welcome. A refreshing thought, not to try to place our writing in boxes they do not fit. Just write and see where it takes us. X
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello and smiles jusylee72
Let me tell you I had o much fun reading you which I call a prose poetry
I know that the famous poet of od ( William Woodworth ) liked writing prose poetry.
Gert
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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Hello and smiles jusylee72
Let me tell you I had o much fun reading you which I call a prose poetry
I know that the famous poet of od ( William Woodworth ) liked writing prose poetry.
Gert
Comment Written 13-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. It really is a dilemma , but that's the way I write.
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I like your style.
Gert
