Comment from pattipac

Excellent

Roy, you have managed to project our ! Lord's purpose for enduring the agony of the cross to save mankind in your well written poem. Good luck in this contest.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2016

Thanks so much Pat, for your encouraging, constructive and gracious review and comments, blessings, Roy

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Well, once more, Roy, you've penned a poem that uplifts and inspires, and what better time than the season of rebirth is there to talk about love and purity? I hope this is as well-received for this contest as it should be! "Now God is love; revealed in Christ, who came to save all men..."

Indeed - the one thing above the law. Blessings, my friend.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016

Thanks Dawn, for these encouraging gracious words and great review, happy Easter my friend, blessings, Roy

Comment from Phoenix Rysing

Exceptional

This should be 'bottled' and sold. It's an absolutely beautiful piece of writing worthy to be framed and hung. I haven't checked the contest, but if voting is still open, You definitely have mine. Beautifully done.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016

Thanks so much for these outstanding words and encouraging review and very generous rating, blessings and happy Easter, Roy

Comment from boxergirl

Exceptional

Hi Roy,
Great job with your Easter Poem about real love and what it looks like. If only people would open up and let His love shine through them...What a wonderful world!

Happy Easter, my Brother!

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016

Thanks so mu

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Highly spiritual poem regarding Jesus Christ and how He died on cross for our sins. Such a dynamic photo and powerful image. liberty justice.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016

Thanks LB, for these encouraging gracious words and great review, happy Easter my friend, blessings, Roy

Comment from Javed05

Excellent

Thought stimulating piece. It flows well. Rhyming is good. Raises lot of questions. I found it engaging. Thanks for sharing it with us.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016

Thanks, for these encouraging gracious words and great review, happy Easter my friend, blessings, Roy

Comment from Writingfundimension

Excellent

Hi, Roy

Another wonderful poem by one of my favorite FanStorians.

Love this stanza:

'Jesus said, "placate that blow
and turn the other cheek;"
a gentle word will turn away
that rage before its peak.'

I wish you the best of luck with this superb entry in the Easter Poem contest.

:) Bev

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016

Thanks Bev, for these encouraging gracious words and great review, happy Easter my friend, blessings, Roy

reply by Writingfundimension on 27-Mar-2016

You're really welcome, Roy.

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A beautiful testimony of faith Roy. Excellent message to read on this Easter weekend.
Good abcb rhyme and as always, your poem filled with wisdom for us all.

Well done and Happy Easter.
Janet

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016

Thanks Janet, for these encouraging gracious words and great review, happy Easter my friend, blessings, Roy

Comment from Rdfrdmom2

Excellent

Roy:

This is a fantastic entry to the Easter contest, complete with a stunning
picture of our Lord and Savior. I do not know how people deal with life
without Him as their center.

looking forward to reading more of your work soon
jan

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016

Thanks Jan, for these encouraging gracious words and great review, happy Easter my friend, blessings, Roy

Comment from Judvan2

Excellent

Very pretty poem. True heart of Easter. Great picture. You explain well how love can be the key to solving problems. I like the last line one consuming thirst...true selflessness is like that in any context. Good luck in contest.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016

Thanks, for these encouraging gracious words and great review, happy Easter my friend, blessings, Roy