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Shifting Shadows. Poems of Darkness

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A collection of dark poetry

18 total reviews 
Comment from c_lucas
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The lady in your artwork is definitely having a bad hair day. Mythology has bits of truth embedded in it. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2016
    Thank you for the review and kind words
reply by c_lucas on 08-Mar-2016
    You're welcome, Gypsy. Charlie
Comment from boxergirl
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Hi Gypsy,
I've always enjoyed Medusa's story and I really like how you shaped it into your poem. Fantastic artwork as well. I'm sure Dean is proud to add your work to his collection. Keep on keeping on!
Hugs 8-)

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2016
    Thank you very much sweetie pie, I appreciate your review and kindness very much:) *gypsy hugs*
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Gypsy,

This is another well written poem. Your work never sounds like horror poetry to me and that's good or I probably wouldn't be reading them. I think you do a great job in writing the type of poetry that is your favorite kind.

Kat

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2016
    Thank you very much! I am grateful for you and your kind review. Peace be with you. *gypsy hugs* :)
reply by MizKat on 08-Mar-2016
    It's a joy to read your work. Kat
Comment from krys123
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Hi Gypsy;
-I just simply love it. This is a great piece of poetry of the macabre you did an excellent job your reference to mythological history.
-picture that you use very eerie and quite relative and appropriate to the concept and theme of poem.
-it's a must to read out loud to really perfect combination of the love and the eeriness of the story. And it also helps reading out loud timing and cadence of the writing which makes the rhythm in reading clear, fluid and easy.
- I like the imagination in this writing which is quite inventive and ingeniously creative and I wouldn't never thought that Medusa would never have a lover until now.
- make a great addition to Dean's collection.
-Thank you for your authors notes they're very helpful in determining which way the writing was going and the biography of you the writer.
-thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always Gypsy.
Alex

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2016
    Alex, Thank you fro the six stars! AND Thank you very much! for the review. I am grateful for you and your kind review. Peace be with you. *gypsy hugs* :)
reply by krys123 on 08-Mar-2016
    You are so very welcome Gypsy.
    Alex
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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wow i have read a few additions and this is right up there with the best, my friend.
Very well done and it raised chills on my skin as i read.
Excellent

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2016
    Thank you very much! I am grateful for you and your kind review. Peace be with you. *gypsy hugs* :)
Comment from ciliverde
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Lol, watch out Dean! No, of course you don't copy him, you admire his style and work on developing your own. My husband said one of my poems was "stealing" Melville's style, which I thought was ridiculous. Anyway, it seems that Medusa fell in love with the Grim Reaper...and why not? Great series of verse and images, Gypsy!
Carol

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2016
    Thank you very much, Sister Carol :) I know what you mean about not copying someone/ just admiring and developing your own. It makes perfect sense to us, right? How come others don't see it that way? Oh, well. It's Not important. I am grateful for you and your kind review. Peace be with you. *gypsy hugs* :)
Comment from DonandVicki
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I like the intensity of your poem and the unusual line up of contributor's. The sweet love poems can get to you after a while so I do appreciate the Praying Mantis love story. Get the love job done then bite off their useless heads, The head with the brains that is. Men can think with either.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2016
    Line up of contributors? I only thank one person, the author of the multi-author book I wrote in.
    The sweet poem got to you? Interesting.
    The Praying Mantis love story? eating the lover's head off is better than loving someone? Awesome concept. I have to remember that one.

Comment from Winslow
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Dear Gypsy Rose,

Ah the power to do Medusa in with love not hate was quite a ploy. For love does conquer evil in the end or at least I like to think so. Well illustrated. (LOL)

Warm regards,

Winslow

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2016
    Hello, Winslow. I appreciate your review and kind words.
    *gypsy hugs*
Comment from BeasPeas
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An excellent poem, Gypsy. Of course, love your art--so please keep on painting and posting it. Vibrant colors and interesting interpretations. Your poem flows well with amazing word choices. Congrats for inclusion in the multi-author book. Marilyn

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2016
    Thank you very much for this wonderful review and kind words. You appreciate and understand my art best of all. It means a lot to me coming from you with your kind of art education and appreciation of art. Thanks!
    *gypsy hugs*
Comment from Unspoken94
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Gypsy, you have no need to explain. Your writing in this genre is
so unique, as is Dean's. I agree with you, this is your strongest
area of write. I've read this a few times now and I don't see any
need of correction. This reads as a story as well. Nice work. -Bill

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2016
    Thank you, Bill, you are very sweet and kind. I am grateful for you.
    *gypsy hugs*