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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
We would do everything to keep our children safe in our arms forever. Sometimes their time is shorter than ours and they have to go first to our heavenly father.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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We would do everything to keep our children safe in our arms forever. Sometimes their time is shorter than ours and they have to go first to our heavenly father.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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Thank you
Sandra, your words are so true
Comment from koolaid228
So sorry to here of your loss, but you are coping through writing, and a great way to honor his memory. Thank you for sharing. koolaid228
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
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So sorry to here of your loss, but you are coping through writing, and a great way to honor his memory. Thank you for sharing. koolaid228
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
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thank you , I miss Michael so much
Comment from William Ross
sad the loss of your step son so young. no matter how old they always are still little in the hearts of mothers. great write and entry on the prompt. have a good day
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
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sad the loss of your step son so young. no matter how old they always are still little in the hearts of mothers. great write and entry on the prompt. have a good day
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
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So very true, we always love them.
Comment from RodG
This poem very poignantly describes a parent's love for her children AND the wish to keep them young. I really like how you describe each child's actions, especially the description in stanza of the little boy climbing "that other gate and not looking back."
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
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This poem very poignantly describes a parent's love for her children AND the wish to keep them young. I really like how you describe each child's actions, especially the description in stanza of the little boy climbing "that other gate and not looking back."
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. I miss Michael very much.
Comment from DarriaStevens82
I liked the phrasing of your lines. It emoted a calm feeling. I was a little confused though...when you wrote Little Girl. I don't think it would've taken anything away if you had started the 2nd verse with Little boy and then wrote more information about him. It was a lovely poem nonetheless. Sorry for your loss.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
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I liked the phrasing of your lines. It emoted a calm feeling. I was a little confused though...when you wrote Little Girl. I don't think it would've taken anything away if you had started the 2nd verse with Little boy and then wrote more information about him. It was a lovely poem nonetheless. Sorry for your loss.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
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I love your comments. I guess I was think of any child, not just my own when I wrote little girl. Great ideas
Comment from A.A.A.EXHILARATING RIDE
What a shame! This is the second in sequence spoilt for me by the colour and size of print against background. And, I'm sorry I can't help; although others will if required. But, my elderly eyes struggled so much to follow the words, they lost the beauty that came so alive in your notes. Thank you for sharing, I am glad you are comforted by faith and many joyous memories. Blessings, Maureen*&*
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
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What a shame! This is the second in sequence spoilt for me by the colour and size of print against background. And, I'm sorry I can't help; although others will if required. But, my elderly eyes struggled so much to follow the words, they lost the beauty that came so alive in your notes. Thank you for sharing, I am glad you are comforted by faith and many joyous memories. Blessings, Maureen*&*
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
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I changed the font, thank you so much for the suggestion.
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Your are very welcome, I shall enjoy another read. Happy days, Maureen*&*
Comment from foxangie123
This is so very nice and sweet. It is very uplifting and full of lines reading faith just as prompted. Fabulous. I would change the color of font because it's difficult to see. Maybe white or black.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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This is so very nice and sweet. It is very uplifting and full of lines reading faith just as prompted. Fabulous. I would change the color of font because it's difficult to see. Maybe white or black.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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Thank you I will try to fix the font. That is a great idea.
Comment from Pyrrho
Tragedy is always just around the corner and I have been unbelievably fortunate, after 82, years never to have turned that corner. As I come to the inevitable end, my fervent hope is that all my Children and Grandchildren outlive me.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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Tragedy is always just around the corner and I have been unbelievably fortunate, after 82, years never to have turned that corner. As I come to the inevitable end, my fervent hope is that all my Children and Grandchildren outlive me.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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I would love to read what an 83 year old writes. I will become your fan.
