Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Easter Poetry writing prompt.
Well written with a clear story of the Easter bunny.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018

Contest past tense, thanking you anyway for your best wishes. Judges saw this version of its write. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

This is a good entry for the contest. Looks like a brand new contest. Kids believe in Santa Claus and then they find out the truth. Easter, though, exists. If the kids want to watch, that is fine. Good luck in the contest. Thank you fir sharing

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018

Contest past tense, did bad. This version is current revisions. Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views.

Comment from apky

Excellent

You have done a marvellous job building up the imagination, especially if one shifts one's mindset to that of children having to read this wonderful poem.

The bunny picture complements your writing to the maximum.

Thanks for sharing,

Apky

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018

Two good strikes you state, hope so. A child mind this write was fun. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.

Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Excellent

TPAC you make me wish I was a kid again to hear such beautiful writing and building up of the imagination and keeping the kids interested in the little rabbit and all the little things he does. Wow there is a writer for every type of subject and you fit this one well I love the form and the wording because it scared just for little kids and as I said I love it too. I hope you plan to write a book of these for the kiddies. Fantastic work.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018

I will consider your thought about the book. I first have my first project to finish. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting comments.

Comment from chaostranquility

Excellent

Fun poem about the different Easter rabbits. I enjoyed reading it, especially the imagery about the "rainbow rabbit". Good luck in the contest, Happy Easter!

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016

A few giggles toward coming event glad some aspects pleased. Thanking you for generous rate and touching thoughts.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

I like the concept of this, On the line
"I get laughs of bugs bunny not roger" i think finishing with the full "roger the rabbit" I'm assuming that's the "roger" you are talking about. Would do a lot. Just an opinion. great job, Like Christmas, Easter gets caught up in fantasy. have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016

Great shout. Bringing the rabbit to define Roger: good call. Thanking you for generous rate and encouraging statements about this write.