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Comment from l.raven
Hi Michael, time to pay up for your sin ... sins committed have consequences...hell waits...definitely one of your darker poems...and very well written...
I started to review it last night...but your video was gone...it might have been my lap top...running slower with the weather...love your unique way writing...you have a great talent...love your poem...and loves you as well...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Hi Michael, time to pay up for your sin ... sins committed have consequences...hell waits...definitely one of your darker poems...and very well written...
I started to review it last night...but your video was gone...it might have been my lap top...running slower with the weather...love your unique way writing...you have a great talent...love your poem...and loves you as well...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Hi Beauty Queen...-smile-
O I was hoping to commit it first...but I'm well aware.
yes yes it is my Poe rogative voicing his right. I appreciate you Dear...my love Michael
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Mr.King, if I didn't care so much...I wouldn't bother...your worth it to me...and I appreciate you as will...my love as well...Linda xxoo
Comment from AnnaLinda
Michael,
I think I'm scared! lol You have great combinations of words to convey your message with good music choice as well. I could do without the blinking skull...but that is my inner child Anna speaking.
Interesting repeating line as well...
Linda
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Michael,
I think I'm scared! lol You have great combinations of words to convey your message with good music choice as well. I could do without the blinking skull...but that is my inner child Anna speaking.
Interesting repeating line as well...
Linda
Comment Written 13-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Its only those with blood on their hands who really know the deepest fear, for they know recompense is deserved. Our sins find us because they've never left....we can be forgiven...but that is a process with no room for ego or pride...and never negates consequence. ...christians who murder life in cold blood plot, then go skipping on their merry way to do more predestined carnage clean as new birth... because they've ask Jesus to forgive them...are not worthy to claim the crown...and insane to think that they are....would mean God a fool and all men trustworthy. love Michael
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That's what grace is for...paid for by blood.
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hm hmm...yes Linda I know.
but Grace is a reader of the inner soul
and only given to them honestly seen....-smile-
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Well that is true...Not my eyes though.
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Oh, so it's by grace we are saved?
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Let me ask you something Linda...do you think one who deceives, manipulates, and plots to sin...is forgiven for it if he or she aks for it in any voice of sincerity...?
I am well aware it is by Grace we are saved through Christ Jesus....but saved from what...?
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I just like to get you going.
It's possible though...Of course, I'm not God.
Comment from dmt1967
I like the picture and the flashing lights. The red light on a skeleton implies there is danger about. I enjoyed the video, god that showed my age lol, and the words of the poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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I like the picture and the flashing lights. The red light on a skeleton implies there is danger about. I enjoyed the video, god that showed my age lol, and the words of the poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Hey there...-smile- ah I changed it by now....but appreciate you enjoying...have a great day. love Michael
Comment from Ricky1024
lol where the poem Michael deeply and dark and well worthy of this review based on Buddhist and Buddhism believe there are seven hells hell number one most extreme vegera hell where my selfmade demon of Zorro list lives in rules tel number to Inferno how extremely hot health hell number 3 the howling house of hell that's where you go when you die and are attacked by an animal cell number 4 is too cold and very cold hells of hell believe in all the can be cold then I guess I'll number 5 is my favorite personal favorite the black rope and black rope Crossing crushing held held for all those who commit suicide whether it's with a gun or with a rope number 660reviving health and last but not the last is Hell or hell for a day where I have gone and visited so each time I think of my sons passing in my late wife 24 out
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2016
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lol where the poem Michael deeply and dark and well worthy of this review based on Buddhist and Buddhism believe there are seven hells hell number one most extreme vegera hell where my selfmade demon of Zorro list lives in rules tel number to Inferno how extremely hot health hell number 3 the howling house of hell that's where you go when you die and are attacked by an animal cell number 4 is too cold and very cold hells of hell believe in all the can be cold then I guess I'll number 5 is my favorite personal favorite the black rope and black rope Crossing crushing held held for all those who commit suicide whether it's with a gun or with a rope number 660reviving health and last but not the last is Hell or hell for a day where I have gone and visited so each time I think of my sons passing in my late wife 24 out
Comment Written 13-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2016
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You see and people get on us because we believe in one.
always trying to out do us...Buddhists with their seven hells...the muslims with their seven virgins of heaven...the mormons with their seven brides right here on earth. Everybody builds their tower to Babel. what ya going do...love Michael
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thanks Michael but I'm a Mormon also I don't know nothing about 7 rides on earth but I sure as hell hope your good work and I need to get married lol 24 hour
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0h...I meant the seven saints...sorry about that...-smile-
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Michael,
A very dour picture you have painted here with these weaving words. Imagery is great and the idea of being stalked by the consequences of all indiscretions is writ large. Great presentation too.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2016
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Hi Michael,
A very dour picture you have painted here with these weaving words. Imagery is great and the idea of being stalked by the consequences of all indiscretions is writ large. Great presentation too.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 13-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2016
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Hey Man...-smile- why thank you kindly. appreciate enjoying my effort. love Michael
Comment from rjuselius
this is an interesting piece of poetry dear friend! haven't heard from you in a long time. indeed, a rather eerie and morbid poem you have here. i'm not quite sure what you mean but somehow i can relate to the poem being schizophrenic and walking in shadows cast along my side.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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this is an interesting piece of poetry dear friend! haven't heard from you in a long time. indeed, a rather eerie and morbid poem you have here. i'm not quite sure what you mean but somehow i can relate to the poem being schizophrenic and walking in shadows cast along my side.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 13-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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ah they unlock the cellar door now and again....Hey Rebekka...-smile-....yes, its twin to received....isn't she beautiful....-smile- ...hm well I've never been diagnosed but I appreciate the confidence. Oh you're welcome...as I said they unlock the cellar door every now and again....see you next time. love Michael........-..
Comment from Joan E.
Wow--you're still rolling along and it's almost the weekend when you might have more free time. Maybe, you'll even create an acrostic! Seriously, your "howl" and scary picture caught my attention. Your dark scene and "sin" theme are compelling and your addition of sounds is very effective. Have a serene holiday weekend- Joan
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2016
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Wow--you're still rolling along and it's almost the weekend when you might have more free time. Maybe, you'll even create an acrostic! Seriously, your "howl" and scary picture caught my attention. Your dark scene and "sin" theme are compelling and your addition of sounds is very effective. Have a serene holiday weekend- Joan
Comment Written 13-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2016
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Hey J...-smile- ...hm...maybe...what is it...? Okay...if that wind ever quits howling Mary. thank you Sweet Woman....love Michael
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If the wind quits howling and you're in the mood, each line of an acrostic starts with a letter of a particular word or phrase in order. Cheers- Joan
Comment from Nika2016
Brilliant! The poem's construction..words..and then the song! The only time I ever did acid I saw your poem and heard Hendrix sing this song. I could not listen to it for years because that night everyone around me was so transparent at the party I attended. Needless to say, no more acid or phony friends. Great job! I gave it six stars.
reply by Nika2016 on 13-Feb-2016
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Brilliant! The poem's construction..words..and then the song! The only time I ever did acid I saw your poem and heard Hendrix sing this song. I could not listen to it for years because that night everyone around me was so transparent at the party I attended. Needless to say, no more acid or phony friends. Great job! I gave it six stars.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2016
reply by Nika2016 on 13-Feb-2016
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Just a note: the acid experience was over 30 years ago, not yesterday. :)
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-smile-...I didn't take you seriously...you know as a ah active acid head...lol.......thank you Maam. ...-smile- appreciate you enjoying...I went read you yesterday....very impressive. ...-smile- I will come by later....love michael
