Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

WOW! Profound and extremely strong convictions. Such a spiritual statement and admonishment to mankind to change their
ethics. Tone is desperation. liberty justice

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016

Hi Liberty Justice, Glad that you liked my Haiku and for leaving me you comments and lovely review. Many thanks and Cheers Christine😃

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016

Hi Liberty Justice, Glad that you liked my Haiku and for leaving me you comments and lovely review. Many thanks and Cheers Christine😃

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

Very unique take on endangered! It certainly seems
between homicide and wars, we, as a species are
bent on annihilating ourselves.
Throw in the damage we do to nature and the environment
and it looks like extinction is a lock :-(

Well said!

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016

Hi Leineco. Thanks you for reading and reviewing my haiku, Yes we are not very good at preserving ourselves., so thought I would use this as my premise for this promt. Many Cheers for your comments

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

I do agree to a certain point but the wars and plagues and general situation of the world takes a greater toll on wildlife. However people killing people for something noble is days in the past. Now it's just killing for greed.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016

hi Rebekka, Yes This is an intersting take on this subject, I hope we all dont become extinct through our own folly .Many thanks for your input and comments Cheers

Comment from Jeffers63

Excellent

thank you for this fine entry into the haiku-endangered species contest. This is a strong poem that speaks an horrible truth that we are ne worst enemy and that senseless killings are way to often in our lives. Good luck.

Regards
Jeffers63

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016

Hi Jeffers63. Much appreciations for your thoughts and comments and review for mu Haiku. one day we may realise what destruction we are causing all around the world not sure if this is ever possible though Cheers to your

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Fantastic idea for this contest and very well said in these few lines. Presentation adds to the poem also. This should definitely be a great contender in the booths-best of luck.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2016

Hi frogbook, Thank you for reading my Haiku for this prompt and glad that you agree. I think we are the ones at most risk at ties with what goes on in our world. Cheers for your best of luck wishes

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello author, your haiku poem speaks in words of wisdom, especially:

slaughter of our own

(Man can be his own worst enemy, and Man better wake up before its too late ... Mother Earth watches and weeps.)

A poem of truth. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2016

Hi LateBloomer, Many thanks for stopping by to read my Haiku and I am pleased you thought it a good entry. The prommt immediately brought Man to mind as the endangered species. We need to wake up. Many Cheers for your thoughts

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

A very nice piece-I can surely say you've created some strong images and emotions. Your words are well chosen. The artwork compliments the theme. Thanks for sharing--

Good luck in the contest

Bill

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2016

Hi Bill, Thanks you for your review and rating for my Haiku. Personally I think Man is his own worst enemy , what is happening at the present is scary and we need a wakeup call. Thanks for your comments and good luck wishes

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

This is good and very meaningful we could be if missiles start flying. Good luck to you on the prompt and have yourself a great day.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2016

Hi William, Yes I agree lets hope the missiles stay where they are, What a destructive world man is creating ! . This prompt was a good opportunity to highlight this. Cheers

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

Indeed, man is his own worst enemy. Your work says a lot about the evil of man not only to the plants, animals and planet but to his very being.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2016

Hi DonandVicki, Ues I think we are an endangered species if we keep going as we do. I just wish man would wake up. Many Thanks for reading my Haiku. Cheers

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

Very powerful. I also wonder how we can be so stupid - we never seem to learn. And it seems on the verge of getting worse. Frightening. Good work

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016

Thank you Douglas for reading and rewiewing my Haiku . I really don't see another species at so much risk than man, One day it will beto late to wake up Many Cheers