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Viewing comments for Chapter 365 "Undulating Snow"Small and Specialty Poems
10 total reviews
Comment from IndianaIrish
What an interesting poem format this is, Tom, and It seems perfect to portray your imagery and words. I loved visualizing the combination of snow shadows and the sun-sparkled snow patterns. A beautiful sight.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2016
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What an interesting poem format this is, Tom, and It seems perfect to portray your imagery and words. I loved visualizing the combination of snow shadows and the sun-sparkled snow patterns. A beautiful sight.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment Written 10-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2016
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Thank you Karyn. I am pleased you liked it.
Comment from Joan E.
Thanks for introducing me to a form Pantygynt created--even its name is intriguing. Your rhymes and repeats emphasize the contrast you painted between a cloudy and sunny day. And I enjoyed your "sheets" simile and personification of the "trees". Well done! -Joan
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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Thanks for introducing me to a form Pantygynt created--even its name is intriguing. Your rhymes and repeats emphasize the contrast you painted between a cloudy and sunny day. And I enjoyed your "sheets" simile and personification of the "trees". Well done! -Joan
Comment Written 09-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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Thank you Joan. You made my day.
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Well deserved! Enjoy Sunday too- Joan
Comment from Pyrrho
It is a pleasure to read an up poem about the winter. So many poets use it as a metaphor for sadness or a sad precursor to better times.
I do have a problem with "undulating snow" because my visual demands the light to undulate. Your choice however, and it does read well.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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It is a pleasure to read an up poem about the winter. So many poets use it as a metaphor for sadness or a sad precursor to better times.
I do have a problem with "undulating snow" because my visual demands the light to undulate. Your choice however, and it does read well.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Thank you Pyrrho. So, how do you feel about rolling hills? Lol.
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You nailed me, Treischel ... Good one. Are they cliches or metaphors? or both?
Comment from Douglas Paul
I really like this and I really appreciate your desription of the form you used. I live in Florida now, but grew up in Michigan, I have seen the scenes you depict and i really miss them sometimes. I think this was really well done. Good for you. Great photo too by the way
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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I really like this and I really appreciate your desription of the form you used. I live in Florida now, but grew up in Michigan, I have seen the scenes you depict and i really miss them sometimes. I think this was really well done. Good for you. Great photo too by the way
Comment Written 08-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Thank you Douglas. My brother just returned from 6 weeks in Florida. He said to was very hot and humid down there this year.
Comment from Pantygynt
A blast from the past or a rave from the grave. Cat told me this was around an hour or two ago. I am hono urged you should think to use it again. I do like the idea of linking ingredients the stanzas through the repeated, non rhyminG third line. Let us both claim mutual authorship of this form.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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A blast from the past or a rave from the grave. Cat told me this was around an hour or two ago. I am hono urged you should think to use it again. I do like the idea of linking ingredients the stanzas through the repeated, non rhyminG third line. Let us both claim mutual authorship of this form.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Thanks Pantygynt. I wouldn't dream of it. This is your creative forms. Glad you liked it.
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I did that on a tablet with auto correct. Almost complete gobbledegook you must have thought I was drunk. Lol
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Nope, I make enough mistakes of my own, between autocorrect and fat fingers. Lol.
Comment from chcbeck
I had to lol up the word undulating, and that's what I love a poem which stretches my limits and extends my vocabulary. I never thought of snow shaping in waves but the picture has captured this perfectly.
I also like to learn about new styles and found it great that you took a style from someone here but added your own touch too.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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I had to lol up the word undulating, and that's what I love a poem which stretches my limits and extends my vocabulary. I never thought of snow shaping in waves but the picture has captured this perfectly.
I also like to learn about new styles and found it great that you took a style from someone here but added your own touch too.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Thank you chcbeck. We are a creative group around here.
Comment from His Grayness
Deserving six stars for this amazingly gifted writer and fine work as always. The lessons are always a gift and his gifts are endless lessons so my thanks prevail in all ways for this powerful FS Contributor and Teacher! HIS GRAYNESS
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Deserving six stars for this amazingly gifted writer and fine work as always. The lessons are always a gift and his gifts are endless lessons so my thanks prevail in all ways for this powerful FS Contributor and Teacher! HIS GRAYNESS
Comment Written 08-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Thank you Vance. I am honored to be considered a poet and even more so - a teacher.
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My Pleasure always! Vance
Comment from dmt1967
Winter must be upon us as everyone is writing about it lol. I like this poem. It describes a blustery day and makes me think of Winnie the Pooh. I like the picture as well. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Winter must be upon us as everyone is writing about it lol. I like this poem. It describes a blustery day and makes me think of Winnie the Pooh. I like the picture as well. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Thank you DMT.
Comment from Jeffers63
Thank you for sharing your lovely poem. The imagery is beautiful and also thank you for teaching about Symmetrina it is always great to learn new things about poetry.
Kind Regards
Jeffers63
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Thank you for sharing your lovely poem. The imagery is beautiful and also thank you for teaching about Symmetrina it is always great to learn new things about poetry.
Kind Regards
Jeffers63
Comment Written 08-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Thank you Sandra.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Snow for me is always wonderful and magical. We don't see snow very often here, for us it is a wonderland when we are fortunate to have some snow.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Snow for me is always wonderful and magical. We don't see snow very often here, for us it is a wonderland when we are fortunate to have some snow.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Thank you Sandra. Here's to snow!
