Little Poems
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Comment from The Ponderer
Brilliant, I liked this poem very much, which I had read before your notes, and picked up on the fact you can read it many ways, a joy to read, well done indeed, lets see some more of same.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2016
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Brilliant, I liked this poem very much, which I had read before your notes, and picked up on the fact you can read it many ways, a joy to read, well done indeed, lets see some more of same.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2016
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Thank you the pondered.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
She is lovely, Tom, and you are right, there is nothing to compare with a baby's smile. If only they could all stay so sweet and loving, what a wonderful world we would live in. Love the photo you took of her. :) Sandra xsx
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2016
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She is lovely, Tom, and you are right, there is nothing to compare with a baby's smile. If only they could all stay so sweet and loving, what a wonderful world we would live in. Love the photo you took of her. :) Sandra xsx
Comment Written 03-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2016
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Thank you Sandra. She is a cutie, even at 3 now.
Comment from Pantygynt
This is an interesting form. I have seen something like it elsewhere, in ourt Poems and Pints Group some years ago but that was based on the saltire shape so there were only five words involved, but the same principle. Great picture, Grandad. Mine are pretty grown up now - not so much cute as interesting.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2016
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This is an interesting form. I have seen something like it elsewhere, in ourt Poems and Pints Group some years ago but that was based on the saltire shape so there were only five words involved, but the same principle. Great picture, Grandad. Mine are pretty grown up now - not so much cute as interesting.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2016
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Thank you Pantygynt. Thanks for the compliment.
Comment from teols2016
Nicely crafted. It is too bad you can't post it in it's intended format, but it is still a good read. A nice tribute to your granddaughter. Thumbs up.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2016
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Nicely crafted. It is too bad you can't post it in it's intended format, but it is still a good read. A nice tribute to your granddaughter. Thumbs up.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2016
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Thank you teols.
Comment from tfawcus
Another interesting form and a fine example of it. New facets of the baby's smile are revealed at every turn! Perhaps I should have a go at one when my first granddaughter is delivered next month!
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Another interesting form and a fine example of it. New facets of the baby's smile are revealed at every turn! Perhaps I should have a go at one when my first granddaughter is delivered next month!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2016
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Thank you Tny. Absolutely, give it a go.
Comment from trumby
Very beautiful poem for an equally beautiful baby. I wish I had someone like her. I enjoyed reading your poem and I love looking at your grandkid. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2016
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Very beautiful poem for an equally beautiful baby. I wish I had someone like her. I enjoyed reading your poem and I love looking at your grandkid. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2016
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Thank you trumby. She is a cutie.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A cute poem and the little ones are so very cute at any age. My grand daughter now 5 refuse to wish anybody a happy new year, the reason unknown, but I still got a kiss, a smile and a hug. I don't know if something is up with my tablet but there is no photo visible.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2016
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A cute poem and the little ones are so very cute at any age. My grand daughter now 5 refuse to wish anybody a happy new year, the reason unknown, but I still got a kiss, a smile and a hug. I don't know if something is up with my tablet but there is no photo visible.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2016
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Thank you Sandra. It is there now. You reviewed it before I could add it
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Too quick I was online at that moment
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Pretty smile
