Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for adding your voice to the call for peace. Perhaps, if enough of us sing out, our wish will be fulfilled. I have never tried a Hexaverse, but it certainly worked for your theme. Cheers and have a serene weekend- Joan

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016

Thank you Joan, will do. U 2.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Another interesting form, Tom, and one with a rising crescendo of emphasis - more than just a mantra. I too hope that 2016 will be a more peaceful one than its predecessor.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016

Thank you Tony.

Comment from trumby

Excellent

What a wonderful wish, mate. Peace, everyone wants it but only few are working to have it. If everyone will work to have peace, it will be a beautiful world to live in. I learned a new style here. Its really a good thing to be in this site, you got to meet heaps of people who shares the same passion and learn new knowledge while enjoying. Thank you for sharing this.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2016

Thank you trumby. Yes, it's a great site to be on.

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Treischel,

I appreciate your author notes and I think your message of peace
is very well conveyed using this form. Very impressive rhymes and
reverse order used as well.

It seems like a strong prayer like piece for peace. Very well done
with this!

Linda

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2016

Thank you Linda. I like your piece for peace comment.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

It is a noble wish, Tom, one I share, but doubt will ever see. There are people out there who thrive on war and will stop at nothing to keep it going. But, we can still hope and pray that one day it will come. Happy New Year, my friend, to you and your wife. xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2016

Thank you Sandra. I am afraid you're right.

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Peace is recurring refrain of poem. Peace is theme
of writing. Poem wants peace and love, peace for world problems, and parce as a resolution. Peace philosophy rebounds in reader's minds.libertyjustice

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2016

Thank you Liberty. Yes, Peace!

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

Peace is one thing we really need and we can pray to have peace, but if there is still people who don't want to have peace and keep on causing conflict, peace stays just a word and a wish.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2016

Thank you Sandra, so sad,y true.

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Love this meditation on peace. What an interesting form. Normally I do not like list-like poems but this one works splendidly, building a crescendo of pleas for peace. I enjoyed it read aloud. Bravo. Love the rhyming and rhythm! I like the rhyme scheme too--with a couple of random lines unrhymed. Accomplish and wish--nice rhyme pair!

Peace please---Yes! AMEN!

Warmly, rd

PS Nice photo.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2016

Thank you very much Rama Devi, for a wonderful review.

reply by rama devi on 01-Jan-2016

:-)

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This sort of mathematical progressive poetry is great for a celebratory event such as New Year. It would go well in a greetings card. This is cleverly done and achieves its aim in fine fashion.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2016

Thank you Pantygynt. Now I need to catch up on my reviewing. Everybody is coming out of the woodwork.

reply by Pantygynt on 01-Jan-2016

We all want to get a rating to start the New Year.