Christine's Poems
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Comment from Bill Schott
This poem of winter, Winter Ecstasy, is a racy, first-person monolog of what sounds like the sexual conquest of the season. The land is definitely his, in this hot, yet cold seduction. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2015
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This poem of winter, Winter Ecstasy, is a racy, first-person monolog of what sounds like the sexual conquest of the season. The land is definitely his, in this hot, yet cold seduction. Nice poem.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2015
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Hi Bill. Merry Christmas hope you had a lovely day..Thank you for reading Winter Ecstasty and for your review Exactly as I had meant it to be. Appreciate your time on this busy day Cheers Christine🎅
Comment from Zue65
I like the way you personified winter and made us see winter like a lover in tryst with a beloved. The personification quite consistent in each line of the poem and quite effective in painting the image to the readers. Thanks for sharing an excellent write. God bless.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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I like the way you personified winter and made us see winter like a lover in tryst with a beloved. The personification quite consistent in each line of the poem and quite effective in painting the image to the readers. Thanks for sharing an excellent write. God bless.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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Thank you nassus1957 for reading my Winter poem I enjoyed bringing winter into a new light and had fun creating this . I appreciate you kind words Cheers Christine😃
Comment from Falco Ferox
Full of winter/sex metaphor. Good meter and verbiage. Fairly well done and readable without a lot of thought commitment.
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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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Full of winter/sex metaphor. Good meter and verbiage. Fairly well done and readable without a lot of thought commitment.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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Thank you Falco Ferox for reading my poem and giving me your feedback and a good rating this is much appreciated so Cheers Christine😃
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like the photo very much.
-Well written with good meter and rhyme.
-I would say you personified winter very well, making it like an impassioned lover, an interesting concept.
-The imagery was good, and developed the poem, too.
-The poem begins with Winter's objective:
"To take the warmth now from your soul"
- A few that stood out for me are:
* "I'll take my time to make you cold"
* "For I'll return one Winter's night
Reclaim your soul and hold you tight."
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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-I like the photo very much.
-Well written with good meter and rhyme.
-I would say you personified winter very well, making it like an impassioned lover, an interesting concept.
-The imagery was good, and developed the poem, too.
-The poem begins with Winter's objective:
"To take the warmth now from your soul"
- A few that stood out for me are:
* "I'll take my time to make you cold"
* "For I'll return one Winter's night
Reclaim your soul and hold you tight."
Comment Written 22-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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Hi respa1. I always enjoy your reviews and thanks again for reading my poem and giving me such a great rating and feedback that means a lot to me . Thank you so much for your continued support and I would like to wish you a very Merry Xmas and have a lovely new Year. Cheers Christine😃
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You are welcome for the review and support. Thank you for your comments, as they mean a lot to me, as a reviewer. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you, as well.
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Ditto
Comment from rspoet
Sounds like a cold heart-ed person
stealing warmth from your soul
curl your toes with freezing sin
I'm not quite sure how anyone would "melt"
Winter numbs all your senses
till you can't feel a thing
But at least he'll be gone for three seasons out of four
I suggest a trip to Florida next year
leave winter behind
Very good story
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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Sounds like a cold heart-ed person
stealing warmth from your soul
curl your toes with freezing sin
I'm not quite sure how anyone would "melt"
Winter numbs all your senses
till you can't feel a thing
But at least he'll be gone for three seasons out of four
I suggest a trip to Florida next year
leave winter behind
Very good story
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 22-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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Hi rspoet Thanks for you great review and yes I did take a bit of poetic licence to create Winter in this light, but I hoped it worked as a story and glad you thought it a good one. It came Third which was fun. Also can I thank you for you lovely support for my work since joining FS. I always respect your comments. so a big Cheers to you and Merry Xmas and have a great New Year. Christine 😃
Comment from JanPerry
Thanks God someone on FS used the word ecstasy apart from me!
I thought no one else had this feeling like I have experienced many times.
[except for sex that is lol] I am using this word metaphorically.
I enjoy the poem and its relation to winter, it's good you enjoy it so much.
[I would lose the pink background, makes it look very dull indeed]
Nice story, hope you win. [I have read the other entries though, its a tough challenge out there for this contest!!]
Jan
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2015
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Thanks God someone on FS used the word ecstasy apart from me!
I thought no one else had this feeling like I have experienced many times.
[except for sex that is lol] I am using this word metaphorically.
I enjoy the poem and its relation to winter, it's good you enjoy it so much.
[I would lose the pink background, makes it look very dull indeed]
Nice story, hope you win. [I have read the other entries though, its a tough challenge out there for this contest!!]
Jan
Comment Written 22-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2015
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Thanks Jan for your review and great comments and encouragement re the choice of words used. isn't that what's it all about? using descriptive words to suit the mood of the poem hope so anyway didn't win (3rd) which I was pleased with anyway and yes it was a tough field but win lose or draw I am enjoying these contests and stretching my brain LOL I will review the pink colour too Cheers and Merry Xmas Christine😊
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3rd is very cool.
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Cheers 😃
Comment from Louise Michelle
I really like this. You did a good job personifying winter and you've taken it a step further than others I've read.
Winter as a lover - how unique and clever! Well done. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2015
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I really like this. You did a good job personifying winter and you've taken it a step further than others I've read.
Winter as a lover - how unique and clever! Well done. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 22-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2015
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Hi Louise Thank you very much for your great review and comments I try to write from a different perspective and this is how my poem evolved once I wrote the first line so Cheers for reading my work and Hugs back Christine😃
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
This is a really erotic personification of Winter. Well written with good even tempo and good aabb rhyme throughout. Good Luck in the contest and Merry Christmas to you and yours -= Dorothy x
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2015
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This is a really erotic personification of Winter. Well written with good even tempo and good aabb rhyme throughout. Good Luck in the contest and Merry Christmas to you and yours -= Dorothy x
Comment Written 22-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2015
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Hi Dorothy My grateful thanks for reading my Winter poem entry and I hope it was not too over the top suggestive but just had enough hint of the erotic theme to do it justice. Cheers so much for your support and a very Merry Xmas to you and your too . Christine x😃
Comment from Jared_L
I have to be careful handing out the six stars but I just cant resist. It is the style, meter and rhyme style that I personally prefer and it is executed perfectly. First time through no stumbles with words or meter and the feeling flowed the whole way. This is one that the only reason I am going to read it a second time is for pure enjoyment.
Third stanza first two lines are divine. My favorite ones! I will be looking at more of your work!!! Thank-you for sharing with me!
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2015
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I have to be careful handing out the six stars but I just cant resist. It is the style, meter and rhyme style that I personally prefer and it is executed perfectly. First time through no stumbles with words or meter and the feeling flowed the whole way. This is one that the only reason I am going to read it a second time is for pure enjoyment.
Third stanza first two lines are divine. My favorite ones! I will be looking at more of your work!!! Thank-you for sharing with me!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2015
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Oh Jared, I am so pleased with your review and glad I could extract a six from you. Thank you so much you have made my night. I would be honoured to have you look at more of my work. I am relatively new to this site. I joined in May this year and have such a great time and haven't written so much ever, so it is reviews and ratings that make me keep writing so I thank you so much and look forward to sharing more with you With sincere Thanks for your time and lovely comments Cheers Christine
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You are very welcome! When its good its good and this definitely is!
Comment from CallieWVU2
It's kind of like you've danced around in my mind a bit, kind of weird, but in a good way, I just imagine that this is kind of how I expect to feel after I sort of make the man in my life mine for the first time, not to be TMI. I really loved how it was this jaunty kind of rhyme, but that it was deeper than that, on several levels of intimacy. Well done! Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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It's kind of like you've danced around in my mind a bit, kind of weird, but in a good way, I just imagine that this is kind of how I expect to feel after I sort of make the man in my life mine for the first time, not to be TMI. I really loved how it was this jaunty kind of rhyme, but that it was deeper than that, on several levels of intimacy. Well done! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Hi CallieWVU2 I am pleased you enjoyed my poem of Winter and thanks for seeing this on several levels as it was meant to be interpreted so that makes me happy too . I am a bit of a stickler for good old fashioned rhyme and rhythm and I enjoyed writing this so thanks for reading and for your feedback they are appreciated. Cheers Christine😃
