Wild and Free
Narrative in Alouette form62 total reviews
Comment from anabellapongasi
What a beautiful classic love story in a poem, wonderfully composed using the alouette form. Lovely flow, good storyline, nice rhymes and great cadence, make this very enjoyable to read.
This is a very strong entry. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Anabella
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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2015
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What a beautiful classic love story in a poem, wonderfully composed using the alouette form. Lovely flow, good storyline, nice rhymes and great cadence, make this very enjoyable to read.
This is a very strong entry. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Anabella
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Comment Written 09-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2015
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Thanks, Annabella - glad you enjoyed the story.
Steve
Comment from Tessa Kay
This style seems to suit you very well. I was transported to the Middle Ages with knights and castles and outlaws and princesses. Very nice.
All the best in the contest. :)
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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2015
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This style seems to suit you very well. I was transported to the Middle Ages with knights and castles and outlaws and princesses. Very nice.
All the best in the contest. :)
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Comment Written 09-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2015
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Thanks, Tessa - I like to let my romantic side out for a little play every now and then.
Steve
