Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 348 "Remember Him"Small and Specialty Poems
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Comment from robyn corum
Tom,
It's no surprise to me that I enjoyed this poem. Whenever I see your name in my in-box, I already know what I'm in for! [-->Intriguing new poetic forms I (usually) haven't seen before, another wonderful personal photo and an intricately worded message that makes me think.] *smile*
I always look forward to them! Thanks!
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Tom,
It's no surprise to me that I enjoyed this poem. Whenever I see your name in my in-box, I already know what I'm in for! [-->Intriguing new poetic forms I (usually) haven't seen before, another wonderful personal photo and an intricately worded message that makes me think.] *smile*
I always look forward to them! Thanks!
Comment Written 09-Dec-2015
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Thank you Robyn. That is really nice to hear.
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your interpretation of this sonnet-like form with its triplets and rhymes. Thanks for reminding us of the true meaning of Christmas and for sharing your photograph of your sister's richly decorated Christmas tree. Hugs and more happy holidays this year. -Joan
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I enjoyed your interpretation of this sonnet-like form with its triplets and rhymes. Thanks for reminding us of the true meaning of Christmas and for sharing your photograph of your sister's richly decorated Christmas tree. Hugs and more happy holidays this year. -Joan
Comment Written 09-Dec-2015
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Thank you Joan. Happy Holidays to you.
Comment from Pantygynt
I think I prefer the more interesting undulating rhyme scheme that you have adopted here. IT seems to me the more subtle variant of the two. Those certainly are some decorations. Are you absolutely sure there is a tree in there? Lol.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, Tom to you and yours.
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I think I prefer the more interesting undulating rhyme scheme that you have adopted here. IT seems to me the more subtle variant of the two. Those certainly are some decorations. Are you absolutely sure there is a tree in there? Lol.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, Tom to you and yours.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. I liked that undulation one better too. The tree is in there somewhere, I see a tiny piece of it at the top. Merry Christmas and Happy Bew Year to you and yours too.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
That is what Christmas is about, to go to church, gather with family and friends, be cheerful and filled with joy. The rest is extra.
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That is what Christmas is about, to go to church, gather with family and friends, be cheerful and filled with joy. The rest is extra.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
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Thank you Sandra. Yup, so true.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, treischel, you did an excellent job writing this triolonnet sonnet about the way we should revere Christ at Christmas. I enjoyed reading it and the notes explaining the form made my eyes glaze over in amazement. sounds real hard
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this is an excellent write, treischel, you did an excellent job writing this triolonnet sonnet about the way we should revere Christ at Christmas. I enjoyed reading it and the notes explaining the form made my eyes glaze over in amazement. sounds real hard
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
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Thank you sweetwoodjax, for a wonderful review.
Comment from writeapoem
Trilonnet Sonnet, I am learning these terms and descriptions of poetry. I cannot say if yours is that way. But I bet it is. But I loved the rhyme and the message especially the admonishment to go to church and by your presence (or giving a present of your self) you honor him by worshipping with him and others.
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Trilonnet Sonnet, I am learning these terms and descriptions of poetry. I cannot say if yours is that way. But I bet it is. But I loved the rhyme and the message especially the admonishment to go to church and by your presence (or giving a present of your self) you honor him by worshipping with him and others.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
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Thank you writeapoem. I appreciate your comments.
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Your welcome
Comment from Neonewman
Remember him, he will never forget you! I love this wonderfully piece you have crafted for Christmas time! I love this time of the year.
God bless!
steve
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Remember him, he will never forget you! I love this wonderfully piece you have crafted for Christmas time! I love this time of the year.
God bless!
steve
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
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Stank you Neonewman.
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Lol! Stank you! Classic key miss, I love it!
My pleasure!
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Lol. Sorry about that. Dang fat fingers.
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Oh I loved it! It's almost as funny as auto correct on these darned cell phones!
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Oh I loved it! It's almost as funny as auto correct on these darned cell phones!
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Lol! Stank you! Classic key miss, I love it!
My pleasure!
Comment from HKay71
This is a wonderful poem. It really brings home the true meaning of Christmas! May God bless you and keep you throughout the Christmas season and the New Year!
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This is a wonderful poem. It really brings home the true meaning of Christmas! May God bless you and keep you throughout the Christmas season and the New Year!
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
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Thank you HIay. And may you receive the same blessings.
Comment from Liberty Justice
Very spiritual poem that says to enjoy Christmas gifts and festivities but don't
forget the real meaning of Christmas.
Lyrics are so bouncy and festive rhyming in a perfect rhyme scheme.
Go to church and pray.liberty justice
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Very spiritual poem that says to enjoy Christmas gifts and festivities but don't
forget the real meaning of Christmas.
Lyrics are so bouncy and festive rhyming in a perfect rhyme scheme.
Go to church and pray.liberty justice
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
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Thank you Liberty. You captured the essence of my message very well.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful poem you have penned my friend. I have not tried that style as of yet. I love the picture of the Christmas tree. I also believe in Jesus Christ being the reason for the season. Hugs , Teri
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This is a very beautiful poem you have penned my friend. I have not tried that style as of yet. I love the picture of the Christmas tree. I also believe in Jesus Christ being the reason for the season. Hugs , Teri
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015
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Thank you Teri.
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you are so welcome
