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Comment from A.A.A.EXHILARATING RIDE
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Yum! Yummy! Yum! I love the golden brown glow to this, so well presented, I feel I can almost smell it coming to the table, and everyone just waiting to stop the chatter and enjoy. And, such details of artistic form, which are like a recipe for the sauce, or currents in the pud for me! Thank you, I wish all your Christmas hopes and dreams realise such delight, Maureen*&*

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015
    Thank you so much Maureen &. Bon appetit.
reply by A.A.A.EXHILARATING RIDE on 10-Dec-2015
    Christmas joy*&*
Comment from Selina Stambi
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This is a fabulous 'essence' poem, Tom.

How on earth do you manage to keep track of all these names?

So glad to read your note on your profile page. Happy to know Karen will soon have relief from her pain. Hope all went well. Prayers going up, of course.

Sonali

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
    Thank you Sonali. She is doing really well with the knee, but back still a major prob.
Comment from Joan E.
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I didn't think there was another form that would inspire you, but you found the Epulaeryu with its epicurean theme, especially timely during the holiday season. I enjoyed your rhymes and exclamation. We plan to have turkey and pumpkin pie again for our Christmas feast. Happy holidays- Joan

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
    Thank you Joan, same to you, Happy Holidays.
Comment from robyn corum
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Tom,

Another fascinating poetry form. You're amazing! Not only to KNOW these things but to be able to create them as well. Kudos, my friend! Great job!

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
    Thank you Robyn. It's all out there on the Internet. Of, course, I still have to write them.
reply by robyn corum on 07-Dec-2015
    THAT'S the hard part! hahaha
Comment from amada
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A great lesson in how to write a delicious Epulaeryu poem. Fun and fanciful to read, how great would be to taste. Lovely setting for a blessed Thanksgiving meal.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
    Thank you amada.
Comment from Pantygynt
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What an appropriate form. This is a delightful little piece providing a statement about your current festival, or at least one that was current when you first worked on it.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
    Thanks Pantygynt. I actually wrote it on time, then forgot to post. I did cook that bird.
reply by Pantygynt on 07-Dec-2015
    I hope you enjoyed it.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A yummy looking cooked turkey. I can imagine the feast that you had with all the side dishes as well. I like pumpkin pie a lot. A great photo.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
    Thank you Sandra, I cooked that bird myself.
Comment from Drew Delaney
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Yum! Looking good enough to eat. The smell of the turkey wafting in the air is comforting and celebrative. How it denotes the very idea of the pilgrims an.d the reason people set time aside for thanksgiving. Nice job! Drew

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2015
    Thank you Drew.
Comment from Bill Schott
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Well, I learned of a new poem today and it's pretty cool. The format is simple and the specificity of bring about food puts it in a close grouping. Nice poem that works for the season.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2015
    Thank you Bil. Lots of potential in the holiday season.
Comment from patcelaw
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Treischel, this is an interesting format which I had not seen before. My head is swimming with formats to try. This could be one down the line. Patricia

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2015
    Thank you patcelaw. A good site to look at for formats is Shadow Poetry.