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Schizophrenic tendencies

palindrome contest entry

14 total reviews 
Comment from trumby
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There's more and more people that are being diagnosed with this problem nowadays. I don't know whether that's a negative comment on society meaning that, in spite of the improvements in treatment, we're getting crazier. Or a positive one, in that our methods of diagnosis are getting better.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2015
    thanks dear trumby for the excellent and insightful review! i love it! blessings!
Comment from Rixsaffony
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

hi
i really dig it.
i get a sense of .....something of........schizophrenia .......
and i think it is awesome how your poem takes us on a journey from a schism to some kind of healing or coming to terms with (how i interpreted it, anyhow) and all in the neatness of a palindrome.
Even the shape of the poem is intersting,
amazing really
wish you very well in the comp

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2015
    thanks dear rixsaffony for the exceptional review! i love it! blessings!
Comment from Eric1
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Hi Rebekka, this is a really good entry for this particular competition, a wonderfully written palindrome using great description for the schizophrenic, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.

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 Comment Written 06-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2015
    thanks dear eric for the excellent review! i love it! blessings!
reply by Eric1 on 06-Dec-2015
    You are very welcome my friend.
Comment from Curly Girly
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Congratulations! I think you've pulled this modern poem off quite well. Schizophrenia seems to have become a rather common modern problem which it often drug related.
Best wishes in the contest.

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 Comment Written 06-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2015
    thanks dear curly girly for the excellent review! i love it! blessings!