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Schizophrenic tendencies

palindrome contest entry

14 total reviews 
Comment from Tomes Johnston
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This is an interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. I can feel the pain in this post and I hope that there is also hope at this Christmas time. Merry Christmas.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
    thanks dear friend for the excellent review! it is most welcome! blessings!
Comment from Louise Michelle
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Wow - this really gave me some insight into this horrible illness. You use such strong words such as fragmented mind and shattered soul. It brought forth some powerful images, Rebekka. Well done. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
    thanks dear friend for the excellent review! it is most welcome! blessings!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello :)

Reality rapes schizophrenia... interesting idea. I have a friend that is schizophrenic and I see him go through a lot of pain and confusion at times. He won't take medicine. He is an amazing artists.

I like your palindrome. It is interesting the way it worked out when you reversed the words. I read a few of these contest entries and they make me want to try it out.

Good job!

Gypsy

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
    thanks dear friend for the excellent review! it is most welcome! blessings!
Comment from Pyrrho
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I must admit, these poem types drive me to mental disorders such as your title.

The usual circle of this form fits itself to your words, or vice-versa or something or another.


 Comment Written 06-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
    thanks dear friend for the excellent review! it is most welcome! blessings!
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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So many good entries for this contest and yours is one more of them. Well written in both forms on a relevant topic. Good luck in the contest. Warm rgards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
    thanks dear friend for the excellent review! it is most welcome! blessings!
Comment from krys123
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Rebekka;
-and actually excellent written palindrome where I found nothing irregular about the beginning or the end of the palindrome. The concept and topic was very interesting and well composed.
- the picture was absolutely appropriate, complementary and relative to the concept.
- the way you flowed was very smooth and read very clear, fluid and easy throughout the writing.
- good luck in the contest and may the good Lord be with you forever.
Alex

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
    thanks dear friend for the excellent review! it is most welcome! blessings!
reply by krys123 on 16-Dec-2015
    Rebekka; you are so very welcome my friend and may you have a very Merry Christmas.
    Alex
Comment from nassus1957
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I am ow beginning to understand how a palindrome works, with the many entries I have reviewed so far. Each line is written backward and it would still read the same as forward or backward. Truly amazing, an excellent write.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
    thanks dear friend for the excellent review! it is most welcome! blessings!
Comment from William Ross
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I really like the piece But i hate the word Fuck in a poem unless it's of adult content/ Love the picture on the Piece. Great work though, for me it's just that one word.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
    thanks dear friend for the excellent review! it is most welcome! blessings!
Comment from royowen
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Well done dear Rebekka, this palindrome entry is particularly powerful and gives you a true understanding of this mental malady, an excellent entry, the words are eloquently but powerfully declared, the reverse order is fascinatingly the same in reverse, so well my friend, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2015
    thanks dear roy for the excellent review! i love it! blessings!
reply by royowen on 06-Dec-2015
    Muy pleasure Dear Rebekah,
Comment from barkingdog
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Being a prose writer, I found this form very interesting as well as what you had to say about schizophrenia.
The form itself is schizophrenic in it's mirroring effect.
Thank you for sharing your work.

Good luck in the competition.

:) ellen

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2015
    thanks dear ellen for the excellent review! i love it! blessings!