Act of Endurance
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Comment from Iza Deleanu
You need a certain talent to navigate the wild terrain of politics. Whatever you write or say is questioned and interpreted. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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You need a certain talent to navigate the wild terrain of politics. Whatever you write or say is questioned and interpreted. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Good one would think to have watchers, but not always the case, making it hard to connect. Yet living is yielded by its bounty and not its limited restraint. Thanking you for your generous rate and appreciated viewpoint.
Comment from Eve Vasa
Hello TPAC - I am never sure when I read your work, you are an enigmatic poet, but I like it. It is different and that's really hard to do, to be original. it's easy to quote and stand on the shoulders of others, it is harder to come up with your own ideas. Loose lips are full of quotes, lol
I get the feeling you are talking about the crisis we are facing. But, I am probably not the best person to comment as I don't see it the same way as everyone else. I think it is Gods doing actually, and to be honest. There are too many of us and we need a shake-up. I also think it is a social media event, one of the first ones to go global, social media has reached critical mass. But, it is certainly rendering a lot of information. And there are always winners and losers, even in the worst events that have happened in our history have winners and losers.
I think all the panic is actually going to hit the poorest among us. The virus will take lives, sure, and that's sad for those individual families, but diseases have a habit of doing that, it is natural. But thousands, if not millions of younger people and young families will be pushed below the poverty line if they survive and it will be years before they get on top again. That will be the real tragedy in my opinion. The aftermath the panic will leave economically, and everything begins in mysticism and ends in politics. But if you're fated to die with the virus, you can't avoid your fate, but why take the poor down with you because you are afraid and start a stampede, which is what a lot of that older demographic are busy doing. And it's so typical too. Not a thought for what they leave, selfish to the end, the 'me', 'me', 'me' generation. And in the spiritual domain, that is the reason for the virus. People don't understand the true dimensions of sin and its repercussions. Sinned thoughtlessly to peril.
And as a media event, and they're one of the winners, it traces through social media, which brought so much pressure to bear instantly, that once one politician closed their borders, everyone else was not being kind to their population if they didn't follow suit, but every politician eyes are eschewed because one of them is always fixed on the next election. lol But it has been a domino effect.
But if I'm fated to have my late awakening because of Covid 19, whatever, all I can say is I love those numbers, lol, and if your fate can't be avoided - it is liberating and you are not afraid but living outside of the panic and living it to the full, like you did 6 months ago, and I encourage you to do the same.
It actually hasn't affected us - yet!! As it will go through all populations. We will be better off for it, as it is going to allow us to leverage our businesses rents in the malls. :)
And from all the experts I hear. Get it now, not later when it has mutated. All those so extra stuff is for the system, not for the people, lol.
I really liked your ending here and all the images it brought for me.
Zeal of the wrong kind is ruling this world and we will only ever have true order, which is all you can hope for in a crowd of 8 billion opinion, or so, not peace, to want peace is delusional by nature, example, and precedent, hahaha Order, and how do you achieve that? Chaos before control. And chaos - brought about by panic, confusion (a condition of too many variables you can't control or understand) and it is all around you now, all the little 8 billion opinions, and if anything, that is the message of the Coronaloner19 ---look at how the pixies are panicked. Look how easy it is to get them in their houses behind locked doors. And I'm Jane Dow, so if I think that way, so are others:)
Lots of lovely original combination of words. Nice to read them at FS today, Cheers, Eve.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Hello TPAC - I am never sure when I read your work, you are an enigmatic poet, but I like it. It is different and that's really hard to do, to be original. it's easy to quote and stand on the shoulders of others, it is harder to come up with your own ideas. Loose lips are full of quotes, lol
I get the feeling you are talking about the crisis we are facing. But, I am probably not the best person to comment as I don't see it the same way as everyone else. I think it is Gods doing actually, and to be honest. There are too many of us and we need a shake-up. I also think it is a social media event, one of the first ones to go global, social media has reached critical mass. But, it is certainly rendering a lot of information. And there are always winners and losers, even in the worst events that have happened in our history have winners and losers.
I think all the panic is actually going to hit the poorest among us. The virus will take lives, sure, and that's sad for those individual families, but diseases have a habit of doing that, it is natural. But thousands, if not millions of younger people and young families will be pushed below the poverty line if they survive and it will be years before they get on top again. That will be the real tragedy in my opinion. The aftermath the panic will leave economically, and everything begins in mysticism and ends in politics. But if you're fated to die with the virus, you can't avoid your fate, but why take the poor down with you because you are afraid and start a stampede, which is what a lot of that older demographic are busy doing. And it's so typical too. Not a thought for what they leave, selfish to the end, the 'me', 'me', 'me' generation. And in the spiritual domain, that is the reason for the virus. People don't understand the true dimensions of sin and its repercussions. Sinned thoughtlessly to peril.
And as a media event, and they're one of the winners, it traces through social media, which brought so much pressure to bear instantly, that once one politician closed their borders, everyone else was not being kind to their population if they didn't follow suit, but every politician eyes are eschewed because one of them is always fixed on the next election. lol But it has been a domino effect.
But if I'm fated to have my late awakening because of Covid 19, whatever, all I can say is I love those numbers, lol, and if your fate can't be avoided - it is liberating and you are not afraid but living outside of the panic and living it to the full, like you did 6 months ago, and I encourage you to do the same.
It actually hasn't affected us - yet!! As it will go through all populations. We will be better off for it, as it is going to allow us to leverage our businesses rents in the malls. :)
And from all the experts I hear. Get it now, not later when it has mutated. All those so extra stuff is for the system, not for the people, lol.
I really liked your ending here and all the images it brought for me.
Zeal of the wrong kind is ruling this world and we will only ever have true order, which is all you can hope for in a crowd of 8 billion opinion, or so, not peace, to want peace is delusional by nature, example, and precedent, hahaha Order, and how do you achieve that? Chaos before control. And chaos - brought about by panic, confusion (a condition of too many variables you can't control or understand) and it is all around you now, all the little 8 billion opinions, and if anything, that is the message of the Coronaloner19 ---look at how the pixies are panicked. Look how easy it is to get them in their houses behind locked doors. And I'm Jane Dow, so if I think that way, so are others:)
Lots of lovely original combination of words. Nice to read them at FS today, Cheers, Eve.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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My greatest aspects detailed in my writes are creativity and originality, suffering in proper grammar arrangements. Glad my shortcomings didn't take away this write intents, thanking you for your generous rate and comforting viewpoint.
Comment from VanessaDanRun
This is an insightful poem! I appreciate the variety of word choices and the way it is put. It provokes thought and makes you slow down to read what the meaning is! Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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This is an insightful poem! I appreciate the variety of word choices and the way it is put. It provokes thought and makes you slow down to read what the meaning is! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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I wish I could take credit, witnessing my struggles to properly convey my thoughts. Thanking you for your generous rate and appreciated ideas prevailing this particular read.
Comment from gudbjorg
There's always a light at the end of the tunnel, a glimmer of hope in an ever darkening world of today. Reminds me of predictions stated by many through the sands of time and one of them is the Bible. Thank you for writing about this in a poem. This is a reality today, no escape except by facing the Light. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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There's always a light at the end of the tunnel, a glimmer of hope in an ever darkening world of today. Reminds me of predictions stated by many through the sands of time and one of them is the Bible. Thank you for writing about this in a poem. This is a reality today, no escape except by facing the Light. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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I must thank you for such an inspiring response, touching thoughts apparent now from both sides, thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
Comment from Greg Powell
Through all the fire and brimstone I searched for a glimmer of light absent from this piece unless I missed it. Though the battle is self evident I feel the tragedy portrayed is the dominance of evil.We done. Stimulated the brain to an alternate reality.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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Through all the fire and brimstone I searched for a glimmer of light absent from this piece unless I missed it. Though the battle is self evident I feel the tragedy portrayed is the dominance of evil.We done. Stimulated the brain to an alternate reality.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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Deep thoughts working on revisions, capturing comments such as yours, thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
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Point Taken
Comment from Dean Kuch
It has often been said that the words that come flying out of our mouths help others to discern what type of person we are--assists others in determining an individuals moral character and ability for compassion.
If nothing but curse words spew constantly from someone's mouth, I personally feel it makes them sound ignorant.
Good message here, TPAC,
~Dean
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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It has often been said that the words that come flying out of our mouths help others to discern what type of person we are--assists others in determining an individuals moral character and ability for compassion.
If nothing but curse words spew constantly from someone's mouth, I personally feel it makes them sound ignorant.
Good message here, TPAC,
~Dean
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2019
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I believe in God and His pending judgement, thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
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You're very welcome, my friend.
~Dean
Comment from meeshu
Speak not in praise of Satan, speak only of his demise and the rise of righteousness. something like that? that is what I got anyway, great stuff, TPAC........................meeshu
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Speak not in praise of Satan, speak only of his demise and the rise of righteousness. something like that? that is what I got anyway, great stuff, TPAC........................meeshu
Comment Written 23-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
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Sound good enough for me, given thought of the coming, warning of more extreme events. Glad aspects in this write were found appealing to your interests, thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from melodymavic
This poem reminds me something. When evil comes, there are some people who are afraid to speak up because there are bad consequence going on. For examples accidents or go on in next life. At the end of the day, when there is darkness, there is light.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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This poem reminds me something. When evil comes, there are some people who are afraid to speak up because there are bad consequence going on. For examples accidents or go on in next life. At the end of the day, when there is darkness, there is light.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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A different way to envision a circumstance, pondering all uncertainties presented to us, finding myself for years afraid to trully speak out on evil. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed response.
Comment from Sam Saylor
This piece left me a little bit stumped, confused and whelmed. I have little idea what is going on though some form of apocalypse perhaps?
despite my lack of comprehension as to the intended content it seems to be written well and have a good bounce to it, I just really wish I understood more what was intended here.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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This piece left me a little bit stumped, confused and whelmed. I have little idea what is going on though some form of apocalypse perhaps?
despite my lack of comprehension as to the intended content it seems to be written well and have a good bounce to it, I just really wish I understood more what was intended here.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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I feel this view having many response lacking the full grasp of this write intent, resolving flaws in my writes most urgent matter. Perhaps a further piece will be more appealing and comprehensive to you. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from babykoala
I found this very hard hitting, thought-provoking and intriguing. It made me ponder on many different aspects of the world today and the information we are told and it made me slightly uneasy. Thank you so much for such a brilliant piece.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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I found this very hard hitting, thought-provoking and intriguing. It made me ponder on many different aspects of the world today and the information we are told and it made me slightly uneasy. Thank you so much for such a brilliant piece.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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I glad at least some portion of this write were found comprehensive, lacking in my writes ability to contain my reader's interests, due to my flaws in these writes. Glad aspects of this work were found appealing to you. Thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
