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Comment from amada
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Excellent 5-7-5 because in simple short three lines you capture the horror of these days, still, unfolding terror. I hope Satan is rejoicing just for a while. There is someone more powerful.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2015
    I agree with you, amada. Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from zanya
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Yes the events in recent days in Paris will resonate for a very long time to come -they make a powerful statement - an interesting look here at the impact of 'Paris mourns again'.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2015
    Thank you, zanya. I appreciate your review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your take on the prompt. Good job with the syllable count. The artwork is super. Your words paint a sad picture, but there is hope with what the response to the attack is doing at the same time. Good job and best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2015
    I agree with your words. We have faith in God, but not in our leadership. President Hollande is a hero to his people. He immediately swung into decisive action. Kudos to the French President. Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from l.raven
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it's so sad ...but your words are so true...and so many in the entire world have lost faith...just can't let satin win...very well written...

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
    Thank you, I raven. I appreciate your review.
reply by l.raven on 22-Nov-2015
    you are soooo very welcome...xxoo luff
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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It's a crazy, horrible week for Paris. I can't imagine living there, visiting there, etc and having to witness and experience what they are going through. I wish there was an easy fix but there are so many bad people out there. Sometimes all you want to do is find out why but sadly we may never know why. They are sick people

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
    Thank you, Liphe. I appreciate your review.
Comment from Glasstruth
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This world we live in is mostly about evil vs. good. 90% of the movies deal with that subject. It's not just Paris, but the whole free world mourns. Wonderfully written. Good luck with the contest. Les

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
    Thank you, Les. We are in for some tough times.
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
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Dear writer,
I like your 5/7/5 poem although I disagree with it. I think that more people are showing their faith and while they may have lost their faith in some leaders, I think their faith is very evident. But your poem meets the requirements for the contest. I wish you the absolute best in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
    You hit the nail right on the head, Darlene. That is exactly what my poem means "lost their faith in some leaders, namely ours. Definitely not God. God is the only thing that can pull us out of this mess.
reply by The Mom/DarleneThomson on 18-Nov-2015
    You sure are right about that. God is the only one who can pull us out of this mess. Yes, Lots have lost their faith in our leader. I will be glad when my son is out of the military. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment from frogbook
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Wow this is a great picture to accompany the perfect words. Well done and powerful. Best of luck with the voting-should have a great chance.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
    Thank you, frogbook. I appreciate your wonderful rating and review.
Comment from Dean Kuch
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But of course he does. He feels as if he's in control of the world at the moment, and he most probably is...for now.
Still, it is only a matter of time before his reign of terror, heartache and misery comes to an abrupt, screeching halt.

Timely 5-7-5 on a pertinent topic.
Good luck in your contest.
~Dean

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
    Thank you, Dean. I appreciate your review.
reply by Dean Kuch on 18-Nov-2015
    Anytime...
Comment from flylikeaneagle
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Mystery writer: great witness of lost. Time to stand in the gap for Paris and the nations for people to know the saving grace and power of Jesus. Our hearts go out to Paris, the land of love. flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
    Thank you for your fine review, eagle.