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Comment from RGstar
Loved this, Michael. Love the energy, the vision, the style.
You keep writing, my brother. Your latest works have become tighter and filled with visions we see clearly.
Sending best wishes,
RG
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Loved this, Michael. Love the energy, the vision, the style.
You keep writing, my brother. Your latest works have become tighter and filled with visions we see clearly.
Sending best wishes,
RG
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Hey Man good to see you...-smile- ah thanks, just messing around lil' bit...lions, tigers and bears make me safari wild. I'm might get up on the table next time...haha...love Michael
Comment from Ricky1024
'Glowing red embers abase...
'A crazed look as she gazed!'
'Need to feed indeed!'
'Yellowed fangs hang...
'It's latest victim...
'As a rope around it's neck...
'What the heck!'
Thanks,
Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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'Glowing red embers abase...
'A crazed look as she gazed!'
'Need to feed indeed!'
'Yellowed fangs hang...
'It's latest victim...
'As a rope around it's neck...
'What the heck!'
Thanks,
Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Hey Rick...-smile- I thank you my Brother.....yes indeed there is Lucifer beautiful....love michael
Comment from l.raven
some times Michael you just can't get too much...forever seems to short of time...when it's good...it's good...LOL...sizzling baby...your words could melt a diamond...
huffing and puffing full moon crazy
gimmie...
greedy forever more
love it baby...and this picture is stunning..
and I love the song...well done you...Love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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some times Michael you just can't get too much...forever seems to short of time...when it's good...it's good...LOL...sizzling baby...your words could melt a diamond...
huffing and puffing full moon crazy
gimmie...
greedy forever more
love it baby...and this picture is stunning..
and I love the song...well done you...Love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 16-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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Well not according to that Eddie murphy movie...did you see how that poor man died...good God I swear his eyes haunt me , his voice accuses me...why! why didn't you save me!....-shivercrawllengthofspine- she murdered that man...swallowed whole in rolls of skin aint nobody ever seen that poor boy again.........-smile- Thank you Sweetheart...love you Michael
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I love his movies...must have missed this one...but I love your poetry...and you are so welcome baby...love you too...xxoo Linda
Comment from amada
Gorgeous work, Michael. I will say that too much of a good thing is never enough...Enjoy the rush. Live and let's be happy. I like this line the most "Garbo gobbled up good and plenty..." Oh, Garbo and those mysterious "g's."
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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Gorgeous work, Michael. I will say that too much of a good thing is never enough...Enjoy the rush. Live and let's be happy. I like this line the most "Garbo gobbled up good and plenty..." Oh, Garbo and those mysterious "g's."
Comment Written 16-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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you noticed that chick who left with me tossed back that gaudy jewwlery....haha...thank you Dear....big love to you....michael
Comment from livelylinda
Michael, Michael: it's 8 a.m., having my first cup of coffee and this poem got my hormones howling! Very sexy, very intimate. However, with my heart so weak, I get chest pains from even thinking about such endeavors. So, I must quickly move along after telling you this is gorgeous, sensuous and quite a wake-up this norm.
Linda
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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Michael, Michael: it's 8 a.m., having my first cup of coffee and this poem got my hormones howling! Very sexy, very intimate. However, with my heart so weak, I get chest pains from even thinking about such endeavors. So, I must quickly move along after telling you this is gorgeous, sensuous and quite a wake-up this norm.
Linda
Comment Written 16-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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well you better pour a shot in that coffee I couldn't sleep last night...I let the tiger out...-wink- haha...big Love....michael
Comment from Joan E.
I swear your tiger locked eyes with me and it was hard to look away! I also got caught by your alliteration of "g's". May the "edge of fall dances unafraid" continue. Hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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I swear your tiger locked eyes with me and it was hard to look away! I also got caught by your alliteration of "g's". May the "edge of fall dances unafraid" continue. Hugs- Joan
Comment Written 16-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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its called the art of the eye Joan...I mastered it several years ago in China. Under the instruction of Master Lee Valentino...hey you were there...did you see him....haha...thank you Beautiful. love Michael
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Nope--I missed Master Lee, but I am fascinated by the "art of the eye". Winks- Joan
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well thats not surprising he's a rather small man but if he ever looked at you...-headtilt-...you'd remember him...-wink-
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I'm 5' 9'' and keep forgetting that Asians are typically smaller in stature, but not in impact! The eyes have it!! -Joan
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ahhaha...well look at that...guess who's who's five nine too -headshake-...yep J...its gettin' kind of spooky all these common denominators....I dont know this maybe meant to be....-smile- love-
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I always knew we were soulmates! Sweet dreams, my friend- Joan
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you know it...-smile-...goodnight-
Comment from Teri7
My friend this is a very good write you have penned. The tiger was great to use as the female part. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Great job as always. Hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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My friend this is a very good write you have penned. The tiger was great to use as the female part. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Great job as always. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 15-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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Hi Teri...-smile-...why thank you Mamm...glad you enjoyed it....love Michael
