Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "Texas And Teardrops"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from c_lucas
I would say you sure got around in Texas, the Lone Star State. The key work is "Lone." This brought to mind, "The Last Word In Lonesome Is ME." Your post is very well written.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2015
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I would say you sure got around in Texas, the Lone Star State. The key work is "Lone." This brought to mind, "The Last Word In Lonesome Is ME." Your post is very well written.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
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Comment from pbomar1115
Traveling alone and thinking about a love is painful. I can imagine the crying, metaphorically. This a well crafted poem.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2015
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Traveling alone and thinking about a love is painful. I can imagine the crying, metaphorically. This a well crafted poem.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2015
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Thank you.
Comment from Lovinia
Hi Brett
I've enjoyed your lyrics and poignant love song. I love the title and it's exactly what you produce here ... covering a lot of territory I see. :)) What a fabulous image.
"Texas and teardrops and neon light
I lost your love on a Lone Star night" -- I like your refrain which creates a strong image of loneliness and loss.
I always enjoy free verse, so no worries about lack of rhyme for me. Well done. Hugs - Lovi xoxo
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2015
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Hi Brett
I've enjoyed your lyrics and poignant love song. I love the title and it's exactly what you produce here ... covering a lot of territory I see. :)) What a fabulous image.
"Texas and teardrops and neon light
I lost your love on a Lone Star night" -- I like your refrain which creates a strong image of loneliness and loss.
I always enjoy free verse, so no worries about lack of rhyme for me. Well done. Hugs - Lovi xoxo
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
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Comment from patcelaw
Brett this is a good lyrical piece. I find a rhyming scheme in every verse. Happy Thanksgiving and may your day be blessed. Patricia
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Brett this is a good lyrical piece. I find a rhyming scheme in every verse. Happy Thanksgiving and may your day be blessed. Patricia
Comment Written 25-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Comment from royowen
Well done with these Lyrics Brett, they would have taken sometime to sing, but they're very good, they are articulate and smoothly rhythmic, they are written in rhyming couplets in quatrain form. They are the normal classic country lyrics, as I understand them, which may not be reliable. You've produced an excellent lyrica, poem, Brett, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Well done with these Lyrics Brett, they would have taken sometime to sing, but they're very good, they are articulate and smoothly rhythmic, they are written in rhyming couplets in quatrain form. They are the normal classic country lyrics, as I understand them, which may not be reliable. You've produced an excellent lyrica, poem, Brett, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 24-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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You're welcome
Comment from GabbyLew
Very beautiful poem/lyrics.
Anyway the freestyle works for this piece. I like the alliterations, and the emphases placed on the words themselves (Texas, teardrops, lost, love, lone), because it helps to maintain the rhythm of the poem.
Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Very beautiful poem/lyrics.
Anyway the freestyle works for this piece. I like the alliterations, and the emphases placed on the words themselves (Texas, teardrops, lost, love, lone), because it helps to maintain the rhythm of the poem.
Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 24-Nov-2015
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Comment from papa55mike
After reading this, for some reason I need a beer. Well done and well written. It has a great flow to it and I love the chorus. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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After reading this, for some reason I need a beer. Well done and well written. It has a great flow to it and I love the chorus. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 24-Nov-2015
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Comment from mfowler
I nearly started singing along with this lovelorn tale of a woman who's cheated and left her man behind. It has a natural easy rhythm and the simplicity of message that makes the narrative so suited to the tale telling of this genre. Your lyrics are solidly supported by your repeated title line and the inclusion of well known geographic locations which gives structure to the story. A great little love song to drink along to. Very enjoyable, Brett.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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I nearly started singing along with this lovelorn tale of a woman who's cheated and left her man behind. It has a natural easy rhythm and the simplicity of message that makes the narrative so suited to the tale telling of this genre. Your lyrics are solidly supported by your repeated title line and the inclusion of well known geographic locations which gives structure to the story. A great little love song to drink along to. Very enjoyable, Brett.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2015
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Comment from Bill Schott
I suspect I will have to dance a two-step while listening to this Texas song. Sounds like lonesome goes along with the Lone Star state. Texas and teardrops for sure.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2015
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I suspect I will have to dance a two-step while listening to this Texas song. Sounds like lonesome goes along with the Lone Star state. Texas and teardrops for sure.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2015
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Comment from A.A.A.EXHILARATING RIDE
Once again I feel so privileged to share the depth, colour, and passion of your lost love and song. Thanks so much Eric, for reviving these, and taking me back to 2002 with you. And, being totally reliant on inspiration, and its gift into place, passion and time, I never look for a specific rhyme; although thanks to FanStory enjoy many as blooms in the meadow of FanStory. I love the image and feeling of Texas that enhances mainly TV images for me. Blessings Brett, Maureen*&*
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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Once again I feel so privileged to share the depth, colour, and passion of your lost love and song. Thanks so much Eric, for reviving these, and taking me back to 2002 with you. And, being totally reliant on inspiration, and its gift into place, passion and time, I never look for a specific rhyme; although thanks to FanStory enjoy many as blooms in the meadow of FanStory. I love the image and feeling of Texas that enhances mainly TV images for me. Blessings Brett, Maureen*&*
Comment Written 21-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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My blessings for your Christmas, New Year season, Maureen*&*
