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Spider, Spider

A woman is frightened

5 total reviews 
Comment from frogbook
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Really good. Glad you got an honorable mention because it was well deserved. Lots of people are scared of spiders so relatable but an original take on what happens..........and a lesson for those who torture us with spiders!

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
    Thanks, I'm glad you liked it
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Yes, sometimes our phobias can do more collateral damage than the things that we are afraid of dealing with. It only takes an instant for something bad to happen. Great story, and good luck. :-)

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2015


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
    You're very kind, thank you
Comment from robyn corum
Exceptional
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P-R-I-C-E-L-E-S-S.

This is a perfect example of a perfect story. As close to perfect as necessary, anyway. I loved it and therefore you have earned this sixer!

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2015


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
    I'm flattered, thank you. From your lips to the judges ears
Comment from Relda Halbert
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Good take on the rationale of irrational fears.
I'm afraid of spiders and a good number of other things.
Fear can cause a lot of collateral damage. Left wondering if John is going to make it. Oh, and also where the spider is.
Fun read.
Relda

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2015


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
    It's not a thing for me. I'll happily pick them up, but i know better than to toy with Er indoors' fear of them. Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it
Comment from Adri7enne
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

LOL! I think any guy who plays around with a woman's phobias deserves to get his brains bashed in. Good entry, snod. Fast-paced, with a glint of dark humour. I enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2015


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
    Well, sure, if killing your husband with a hot frying pan is funny. (edges everso slightly away) Thanks for the review
reply by Adri7enne on 22-Oct-2015
    Scared you, did I? Admit it. You've always been a little afraid of me. LOL!
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
    Afraid? yes. A little? No
reply by Adri7enne on 22-Oct-2015
    Not to worry, big guy. There's an entire ocean between us. Shame! LOL!