Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "You Went Away"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from OnyxSapphire78
This poem was engaging from the beginning to the end. It definitely gives the reader that feeling of sadness associated with break ups and loneliness. This is a nice read. Good luck and happy writing!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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This poem was engaging from the beginning to the end. It definitely gives the reader that feeling of sadness associated with break ups and loneliness. This is a nice read. Good luck and happy writing!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Comment from gamay
Hi Brett.
This very nice poem you written.
"This bottle of whiskey
says all that needs to be said
It tells our love story
Now, it's time to put you to bed
Your memory still lingers
There's so much to recall
I stumble with my feelings
Right through the wall"
Yes you forget the fast when the spirits are gone it will come back again.
Thanks for sharing.
Happy Halloween.
God bless,
gamay
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Hi Brett.
This very nice poem you written.
"This bottle of whiskey
says all that needs to be said
It tells our love story
Now, it's time to put you to bed
Your memory still lingers
There's so much to recall
I stumble with my feelings
Right through the wall"
Yes you forget the fast when the spirits are gone it will come back again.
Thanks for sharing.
Happy Halloween.
God bless,
gamay
Comment Written 01-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Comment from Sambangi
Bitter memories are also sweet but I guess wine is not a solution. Your poem may not have rhyme but flow is quite smooth. Wish all your 5 books be big hits
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Bitter memories are also sweet but I guess wine is not a solution. Your poem may not have rhyme but flow is quite smooth. Wish all your 5 books be big hits
Comment Written 29-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Comment from OLA THOMAS
This is a fantastic poem. Your words and phrases are so effective that it painted the pains and loneliness experienced as you put in:
"You took my poor heart
Dragged it right down the street
Broke it in pieces
Swept it under your feet "
But a reunion in the last verse is enough to wipe off all loneliness and pain.
oal thomas
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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This is a fantastic poem. Your words and phrases are so effective that it painted the pains and loneliness experienced as you put in:
"You took my poor heart
Dragged it right down the street
Broke it in pieces
Swept it under your feet "
But a reunion in the last verse is enough to wipe off all loneliness and pain.
oal thomas
Comment Written 29-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Comment from Teri7
This is an extra good poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. The art work you chose was great. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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This is an extra good poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. The art work you chose was great. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 29-Oct-2015
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Comment from Dom G Robles
I suppose the writer is speaking out his heart for someone that went away but which, he feels deeply in his heart. The rhyme and rhythm are great. The author felt repugnant for awhile and had to drown his loneliness with some drinking. Ultimately, in the end, he feels the love again which had rekindled his consciousness, and he is madly in love again.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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I suppose the writer is speaking out his heart for someone that went away but which, he feels deeply in his heart. The rhyme and rhythm are great. The author felt repugnant for awhile and had to drown his loneliness with some drinking. Ultimately, in the end, he feels the love again which had rekindled his consciousness, and he is madly in love again.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2015
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Comment from godlucifer
love is a companion of itself. love is a lonely of itself. the lonely of love is the loneliness of love. we try to escape but the loneliness keep tracking back. what we see in love is what we escape to that loneliness which is ourselves. when something is gone we are left with a loneliness which we can't fight back and that is love. your poem was written with a define of rhyming and amusingly it was amuse to read. i enjoyed n reading your poem. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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love is a companion of itself. love is a lonely of itself. the lonely of love is the loneliness of love. we try to escape but the loneliness keep tracking back. what we see in love is what we escape to that loneliness which is ourselves. when something is gone we are left with a loneliness which we can't fight back and that is love. your poem was written with a define of rhyming and amusingly it was amuse to read. i enjoyed n reading your poem. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment Written 26-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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Thanks.
Comment from Glasstruth
Nice flow and rhyming. A typical subject. A lover you can't get over. You have a number of good lines, such as: "Misery loves company & A broken bar stool just ain't what I need" Superb. Les
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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Nice flow and rhyming. A typical subject. A lover you can't get over. You have a number of good lines, such as: "Misery loves company & A broken bar stool just ain't what I need" Superb. Les
Comment Written 26-Oct-2015
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Comment from LanceHill
Very nicely written. You have stated a truth in your words. The bottle is often sought to seek refuge. Once the effects have gone the pain is back again. Thanks for sharing. God bless.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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Very nicely written. You have stated a truth in your words. The bottle is often sought to seek refuge. Once the effects have gone the pain is back again. Thanks for sharing. God bless.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2015
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Comment from Bill Schott
The free-style form certainly allows for a lot of elbow room to divert from structure and seek the best word. The rhyme does keep it going.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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The free-style form certainly allows for a lot of elbow room to divert from structure and seek the best word. The rhyme does keep it going.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015
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