Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

When poetry bubbles up inside, you can truly take a ride. Well written with great color scheme and picture. I must find some time to visit your portfolio garden.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2015

Thank you Jean, please do stop by. I'll make us some tea and biscuits!

Comment from artemis53

Excellent

I really like this. I have never been able to appreciate short poetry until lately and this one fits the criteria of a sound 3-5-3 beautifully.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015

Thank you artemis. I like the short forms but doing too many left me wanting a longer poem, hence Synergy and Wild and Free.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

This is beautiful Leslie. You've taking dancing with the stars to new heights. When the heart twinkles on a moonlit night that is just divine.

Excellent presentation and tone.

Nice work!

Gloria

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2015

Thank you Gloria for the excellent review. I'm glad you liked .

Comment from Texasbelle1021

Excellent

Beautifully written. The three lines flowed into the next line.
Made a lot of sense, painted a picture perfectly in the eyes of the mind!
Good luck!

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2015

Thank you Texasbelle.I appreciate the review and kind word..

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I admired the mood you captured with so few words. The clever use of "twinkles" ties all the elements together in a lovely scene. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2015

Thank, Joan, I lied the hear twinkles also. I appreciate your review. Have a good weekend coming up. Hugs.

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

Love the word play on ... dancing with the stars.

Romance in cameo. :)

Love it!

Best wishes for the contest.

Sonali

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2015

Thanks Selina - glad you liked it and got the meaning in the word play.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello :)
wow, you found the right picture for your 3/5/3 poem. Good job with the syllable count. The message is beautiful. I think you did great, good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2015

Thanks, Gypsy Blue Rose. Yes, I think it is a gorgeous photo. Thanks for your enthusiastic review and good wishes.

Comment from mvbrooks

Good

The poem meets the strict syllable requirements of 3-5-3 and the line count. The photo helps to complete the story with the two dancers.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2015

Thanks for your review.

Comment from CALLAHANMR

Excellent

What can be more aromatic than dancing under twinkling stars? Just add a warm hug for perfection.

Good luck.

Roger

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2015

Thanks for the great review and hug. here's a hug back.

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is a charming 3-5-3 syllable poem involving moon and stars. The "heart twinkles" is appropriate to theme. It is nicely presented as well. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2015

Thank you Jeanie - I like heart twinkes also.