Little Poems
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Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
"Teach Thy Children" is an excellent poem following the structure you specified for the Lyrical Virelai. The rhyme and the poem although adequate does not meet the standard of being exceptional.
Your friend and colleague,
Preston
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2015
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Hi, Treischel,
"Teach Thy Children" is an excellent poem following the structure you specified for the Lyrical Virelai. The rhyme and the poem although adequate does not meet the standard of being exceptional.
Your friend and colleague,
Preston
Comment Written 16-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2015
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Stank you Preston.
Comment from trimple
Hi there, Tom
What an interesting style of poetry...
You demonstrate this form beautifully here in this splendid example of what education means to our children.
Well done!
tracey
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Hi there, Tom
What an interesting style of poetry...
You demonstrate this form beautifully here in this splendid example of what education means to our children.
Well done!
tracey
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Thank you Tracey.
Comment from Green Lake Girl
I think you did an admirable job capturing the eager minds of youth. Kids can soak up information faster than any sponge I own. Oh to have that kind of mind again!
I really like the format of the poem. The repetition and physical appearance are very pleasing. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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I think you did an admirable job capturing the eager minds of youth. Kids can soak up information faster than any sponge I own. Oh to have that kind of mind again!
I really like the format of the poem. The repetition and physical appearance are very pleasing. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
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Thank you, yes especially when you catch their attention.
Comment from Pantygynt
Another fascinating form to add to what must be an impressive total. What I admire he is not only the scholarly research that you put in but your ability to then go and write a perfect example of what you have been describing. Many congratulations.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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Another fascinating form to add to what must be an impressive total. What I admire he is not only the scholarly research that you put in but your ability to then go and write a perfect example of what you have been describing. Many congratulations.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. I enjoy the chalkenge of it.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Well written and the children should be learned about everything in this world. Atva young age they are still eager to learn and they should be encouraged all the time.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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Well written and the children should be learned about everything in this world. Atva young age they are still eager to learn and they should be encouraged all the time.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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Thank you Sandra. I agree.
Comment from Joan E.
Your Virelai does have a song-like quality, and I enjoyed your refrain plus rhythm and rhymes. Thanks for the photo of the raptor as well. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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Your Virelai does have a song-like quality, and I enjoyed your refrain plus rhythm and rhymes. Thanks for the photo of the raptor as well. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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Thank you Joan.
Comment from artemis53
Another beautifully piece. I am an avid supporter of taking children from an industrial area to an agrarian and wildlife preserved area. So many children are clueless as to nature. No wonder that they know and employ little conservation efforts or make plans for a more pristine future.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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Another beautifully piece. I am an avid supporter of taking children from an industrial area to an agrarian and wildlife preserved area. So many children are clueless as to nature. No wonder that they know and employ little conservation efforts or make plans for a more pristine future.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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Thank you Artemis. Yes, I totally agree.
Comment from ericawrites
A well written poem, flows well, rhymes beautifully with a strong moral message. Well done, thank you for sharing this lovely piece of work.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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A well written poem, flows well, rhymes beautifully with a strong moral message. Well done, thank you for sharing this lovely piece of work.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2015
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Thank you ericawrites.
