Wet Eventually.
Bushfires, a part of life in Australia.15 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm a real sucker for happy endings, especially, when there doesn't look to be any way of having one until the last lines. Great story, and good luck. :-)
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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I'm a real sucker for happy endings, especially, when there doesn't look to be any way of having one until the last lines. Great story, and good luck. :-)
Comment Written 29-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Hi Ric, Thanks for dropping in, glad you enjoyed. Bless you, Kay XX
Comment from EMB
A fire started by glass shards? Really? I didn't even know that was possible. Well, I trudged on, and your details were great, and I liked the way you personified the fire.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2015
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A fire started by glass shards? Really? I didn't even know that was possible. Well, I trudged on, and your details were great, and I liked the way you personified the fire.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2015
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Oh,yes. Many bushfires are started by glass. The glass acts as a magnifier when the sun hits it, starts a small fire with dead leaves. Australia is known for this. Thanks so much for reading.
Comment from l.raven
HI Kay, I know most of your story are true....and I know Australia and mother nature go at war...this is so very well told and so very well written...I miss ya and hope to be back soon...a perfect picture...Love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
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HI Kay, I know most of your story are true....and I know Australia and mother nature go at war...this is so very well told and so very well written...I miss ya and hope to be back soon...a perfect picture...Love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2015
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I miss you too! This was fiction and I found it hard to write because of the contest rules. The story had to be shaved down to bare bones. I did try. Thanks for reading mate! I did send you a message in your portfolio? Luv, K.
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thank you Kay...sigh...and you are so welcome...love xxoo
Comment from mermaids
This is a wonderful short story that reads like a movie. I am happy the family dog survived and I like the twist at the end, the father decides to live with his family on a riverboat, sounds great! Excellent story that includes the Aborigines and their wisdom. I wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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This is a wonderful short story that reads like a movie. I am happy the family dog survived and I like the twist at the end, the father decides to live with his family on a riverboat, sounds great! Excellent story that includes the Aborigines and their wisdom. I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015
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Thanks so much for reading. Glad you enjoyed. It was hard to clip it, I like to be descriptive. The contest called for bare bones! Blessings, Kay XX
Comment from Eigle Rull
My good friend, this story is wonderful. It immediately brings on the fire, which frightens the man so much. It shows his fears yet he braves the danger to save his children. And then it has a wonderful ending with the house saved and even the dog comers home. This was a thrilling and exciting story and I really enjoyed reading it. Best wishes, my good friend.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2015
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My good friend, this story is wonderful. It immediately brings on the fire, which frightens the man so much. It shows his fears yet he braves the danger to save his children. And then it has a wonderful ending with the house saved and even the dog comers home. This was a thrilling and exciting story and I really enjoyed reading it. Best wishes, my good friend.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2015
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Hello Sweetie Pies, Thanks so much for reading my friend. Hope all is well? Love, Kay.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Well written story depicting the many hazards of wildfires. They can be challenging in many ways. Should also be a good contest entry.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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Well written story depicting the many hazards of wildfires. They can be challenging in many ways. Should also be a good contest entry.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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Thanks for reading Brett. Blessings, K.
Comment from artemis53
Beautifully done, Kaye. I took every word in and was absorbed by the entire scenario. Isn't it interesting what it takes for us to understand what is truly valuable. The riverboat represented so much.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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Beautifully done, Kaye. I took every word in and was absorbed by the entire scenario. Isn't it interesting what it takes for us to understand what is truly valuable. The riverboat represented so much.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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G'day Mate, Glad you enjoyed. How are you traveling my friend? Love, Kace.
Comment from gamay
Hello Sir,
I think this is the first time that I review your work.
But I know you because of Fez.
Anyway it is very interesting story.
I really enjoyed it.
Have a nice day.
gamay
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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Hello Sir,
I think this is the first time that I review your work.
But I know you because of Fez.
Anyway it is very interesting story.
I really enjoyed it.
Have a nice day.
gamay
Comment Written 18-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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Hello Gamay, Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed. Blessings, Kay (lady not Sir) XX
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hehehehe sorry but it is just our respect here
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Yep, you would probably call me madam in your culture? :-}
Comment from Writingfundimension
This is a fascinating story, Kay. I am so glad that the family did not burn to death as their poor mother had. You build the tension very well in this excellent contest entry. This should do very well in the contest. Good luck!
:) Bev
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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This is a fascinating story, Kay. I am so glad that the family did not burn to death as their poor mother had. You build the tension very well in this excellent contest entry. This should do very well in the contest. Good luck!
:) Bev
Comment Written 17-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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Hello Bev, Thanks so much for reading; it was hard to clip words for the contest. :-) XX Kay.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Kay! What a great story! You should promote it. It had me rivited and I was so afraid for them and the little dog and sheep. Then a happy ending. If I had a six it would be yours. Good job my friend. Nancy*****+
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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Kay! What a great story! You should promote it. It had me rivited and I was so afraid for them and the little dog and sheep. Then a happy ending. If I had a six it would be yours. Good job my friend. Nancy*****+
Comment Written 17-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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Hello Nancy. Thanks so much my friend; not easy to write this clipped style. I like loads of descriptions! Love, Kay.
