Dried Red Rose
A Tanka contest entry36 total reviews
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Red roses hold a place of distinction in the world of romance it is so true. Easy to see why this is an All-Time Best achiever and should also be a good contest entry.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
Red roses hold a place of distinction in the world of romance it is so true. Easy to see why this is an All-Time Best achiever and should also be a good contest entry.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
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Thanks Bret, I appreciate your reading and excellent review.
Comment from bard owl
"A remembrance of romance" What a lovely picture your words paint in this Tanka. And it is so true, true love will live on, even in defiance of death itself. I truly enjoyed this touching poem of life well lived. Best of luck in the contest.
Blessings to you,
Linda
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
"A remembrance of romance" What a lovely picture your words paint in this Tanka. And it is so true, true love will live on, even in defiance of death itself. I truly enjoyed this touching poem of life well lived. Best of luck in the contest.
Blessings to you,
Linda
Comment Written 11-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
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Thank you for getting the romantic intent of the poem and for your 6 star review. I greatly appreciate it.
Comment from papa55mike
This a beautifully written poem. I love the dried red rose and how it represents an old love that never will die. Wonderful, good luck in the contest.
Have a great Sunday and God bless, mike.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
This a beautifully written poem. I love the dried red rose and how it represents an old love that never will die. Wonderful, good luck in the contest.
Have a great Sunday and God bless, mike.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
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Thanks Mike for this wonderful review and six stars. I greatly appreciate it. Have a great Sunday, too.
Comment from TAB_that's me
It is so fun to open an old book or antique Bible and find a pressed rose. It makes you want to hear the story.
Great tanka in perfect form. good luck in the contest.
teresa
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
It is so fun to open an old book or antique Bible and find a pressed rose. It makes you want to hear the story.
Great tanka in perfect form. good luck in the contest.
teresa
Comment Written 10-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
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Thanks Tab - I appreciate your review and comments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A beautiful message of true love, if you also married to your true love, it makes it double joyful. True love does not die it carries on beyond the grave.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
A beautiful message of true love, if you also married to your true love, it makes it double joyful. True love does not die it carries on beyond the grave.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
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Thanks Sandra - yes that would be a double blessing and a very special memory.
Comment from Zue65
I agree with you one hundred percent, true love never dies. I enjoyed reading your poem, thanks for sharing your view of love in a poem.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
I agree with you one hundred percent, true love never dies. I enjoyed reading your poem, thanks for sharing your view of love in a poem.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
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Thanks nasus1957 for your excellent rating and review.
Comment from Sambangi
Rose is a rose, dried or fresh. While fresh is current, dried brings back sweet memories. Nice metaphor in very few lines in Tanka form. Good luck
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
Rose is a rose, dried or fresh. While fresh is current, dried brings back sweet memories. Nice metaphor in very few lines in Tanka form. Good luck
Comment Written 10-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
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Thanks Sam for the excellent review and good luck wishes.
Comment from RGstar
Andthe rose, such a potent symbol. Nicely done. Roses with backdrops of music serves as the very pinacle of romance. Well done with the form.
Good luck in the competition.
Best wishes,
RGstar.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
Andthe rose, such a potent symbol. Nicely done. Roses with backdrops of music serves as the very pinacle of romance. Well done with the form.
Good luck in the competition.
Best wishes,
RGstar.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
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Thanks RGstar. Maybe I should have added music to it!
Comment from mermaids
There is a feeling of love and romance from the red rose pressed between the pages. I use to press special flowers in books when I was a child, I had forgotten about this way of remembering events and people in our lives. Excellent tanka form that captures feelings and emotions.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
There is a feeling of love and romance from the red rose pressed between the pages. I use to press special flowers in books when I was a child, I had forgotten about this way of remembering events and people in our lives. Excellent tanka form that captures feelings and emotions.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
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Thank you for the excellent review and I'm glad it brought back memories for you.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello LeslieP5
How nice how your told us the beauty of a pressed red rose in tanka format I liked how you used the word fond instead of saying (found) in this line-
book of life is fond
Gert
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
Hello LeslieP5
How nice how your told us the beauty of a pressed red rose in tanka format I liked how you used the word fond instead of saying (found) in this line-
book of life is fond
Gert
Comment Written 09-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
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Thank you Gert - I appreciate it.
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smiles
Gert