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Comment from Pantygynt
I remember writing one of these in my Littoral collection a few months ago. I had a friend some years ago who bred these little chaps. The house was full of them. What with that kitten the other days you're going animal crackers.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
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I remember writing one of these in my Littoral collection a few months ago. I had a friend some years ago who bred these little chaps. The house was full of them. What with that kitten the other days you're going animal crackers.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. Maybe I'll do Elephants and Zebras next.
Comment from rod007
This poem celebrates both your stepdaughter and her cute dog. Your notes on the history of this breed of dog are interesting. Who said we can't have joy in small packages. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
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This poem celebrates both your stepdaughter and her cute dog. Your notes on the history of this breed of dog are interesting. Who said we can't have joy in small packages. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
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Thank you Rod. So true.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Terschel,
Superior work masterfully using the form of one of the great poetic works of Western literature. Being me I appreciated the history of the name of the breed. I am not much of a dog person but I am sure that Jodi adores him. A dog in a pocket book certainly calls for a second look.
As far as I could tell you perfectly followed the Terza Rima form. The rhythm and rhyme were excellent.
Your Friend and colleague,
Preston
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2015
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Hi, Terschel,
Superior work masterfully using the form of one of the great poetic works of Western literature. Being me I appreciated the history of the name of the breed. I am not much of a dog person but I am sure that Jodi adores him. A dog in a pocket book certainly calls for a second look.
As far as I could tell you perfectly followed the Terza Rima form. The rhythm and rhyme were excellent.
Your Friend and colleague,
Preston
Comment Written 09-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2015
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It is wonderful to see you back writing and reviewing Preston. I have always valued your perception, wit, and dedication to enlightenment. Thank you for the review and the stars.
Comment from I am Cat
I love the Cavalier's... they are so adorable and have the best personalities for apartments. So beautiful.
But I truly have the REAL pocket pooch. He's now seven years old... and only weighs in at 4.5 pounds... His name is Sir Clyde. He's a 'teacup' (not a real classification, according to the AKC) Yorkie... (but don't tell HIM that) Because they are a thing.
I wouldn't suggest buying one this small... and indeed, I didn't. My best friend bought him for me after the poor little guy nearly died... long story, which I"ll have to tell in a story some day... but needless to say, he's mine and he's only about six inches tall but THINKS he's a Rottie. ;)
Your poem is adorable, as is the pooch... I just love dogs! I'll never be without one. ;)
Well done Tom
Cat
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2015
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I love the Cavalier's... they are so adorable and have the best personalities for apartments. So beautiful.
But I truly have the REAL pocket pooch. He's now seven years old... and only weighs in at 4.5 pounds... His name is Sir Clyde. He's a 'teacup' (not a real classification, according to the AKC) Yorkie... (but don't tell HIM that) Because they are a thing.
I wouldn't suggest buying one this small... and indeed, I didn't. My best friend bought him for me after the poor little guy nearly died... long story, which I"ll have to tell in a story some day... but needless to say, he's mine and he's only about six inches tall but THINKS he's a Rottie. ;)
Your poem is adorable, as is the pooch... I just love dogs! I'll never be without one. ;)
Well done Tom
Cat
Comment Written 09-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2015
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Thank you Cat. Here's to Charlie and Sir Clyde. Little fellows with big hearts.
Comment from Joan E.
My, your family loves pets! Thanks for being forever the teacher and giving us details about the Spaniels and the Terza Rima, plus your montage of Jodi's photos. I enjoyed the tercets and the couplet plus the rhyme scheme. It's fun to see how dogs and their owners often resemble one another. Here's to tiny Charlie! -Joan
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2015
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My, your family loves pets! Thanks for being forever the teacher and giving us details about the Spaniels and the Terza Rima, plus your montage of Jodi's photos. I enjoyed the tercets and the couplet plus the rhyme scheme. It's fun to see how dogs and their owners often resemble one another. Here's to tiny Charlie! -Joan
Comment Written 08-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2015
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Thank you Joan. It is fun, indeed.
Comment from ravenblack
Cute pup! Who started the trend for toting pups. I think it was Paris Hilton. But from your daughter's story- a Master's to boot- Charlie is no fashion accessory, but a valued pet. It may just be me, but I keep wanting to say "He'll fit in a cosmetic bag". A good poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Cute pup! Who started the trend for toting pups. I think it was Paris Hilton. But from your daughter's story- a Master's to boot- Charlie is no fashion accessory, but a valued pet. It may just be me, but I keep wanting to say "He'll fit in a cosmetic bag". A good poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Thank you ravenblack. Yes, Paris did do that.
Comment from flamingstar
Can't say I like Terza Rima, but I adore the subject matter! I hope she can get a little house soon with its own yard - makes managing dogs so much easier!
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Can't say I like Terza Rima, but I adore the subject matter! I hope she can get a little house soon with its own yard - makes managing dogs so much easier!
Comment Written 08-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Thanks Flamingstar, She does have a large courtyard just outside here patio. It actually has a pet area.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. I loved the pictures of the dog. The poem is very cute and well written. I have heard of thistype of dog, but have never seen what hey look like. Thanks for the beautiful pictures.
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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Excellent. I loved the pictures of the dog. The poem is very cute and well written. I have heard of thistype of dog, but have never seen what hey look like. Thanks for the beautiful pictures.
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Thank you.
Comment from tfawcus
Exceptionally amusing rhymes in this tercet! I had several chuckles along the way! It's not an easy form and you have woven the rhyme scheme artfully, though 'To keep her company' doesn't supply the rhyme for the following tercet. Perhaps something like, 'As I rightly surmise' would do it. I think 'yuppy/unhappy' was my favorite pairing. Noel Coward could not have done better!
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Exceptionally amusing rhymes in this tercet! I had several chuckles along the way! It's not an easy form and you have woven the rhyme scheme artfully, though 'To keep her company' doesn't supply the rhyme for the following tercet. Perhaps something like, 'As I rightly surmise' would do it. I think 'yuppy/unhappy' was my favorite pairing. Noel Coward could not have done better!
Comment Written 08-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Thank you Tony, it was a fun write.
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I see that I did miss that one for some reason, so I took your suggestion. Thanks for the catch.
Comment from artemis53
Very nice piece and I'm sure that your daughter is thrilled. Pets make life a bit nicer and softer around the edges and that's often what you need after a long day at work. Perfect breed for her needs (and wants)!
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Very nice piece and I'm sure that your daughter is thrilled. Pets make life a bit nicer and softer around the edges and that's often what you need after a long day at work. Perfect breed for her needs (and wants)!
Comment Written 08-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Thank you Artemis. Yes, she is really enjoying him.
