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Comment from TPAC
Poet or not, your statements are endearing and captivating to an audience, not many thoughts fly. I came to FS with that question: still wondering.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2015
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Poet or not, your statements are endearing and captivating to an audience, not many thoughts fly. I came to FS with that question: still wondering.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2015
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Stank you TPAC.
Comment from P1
i love this it moves quickly the rhyme
is very catchy and the words made me
smile. of course you are a poet no doubt
in my mind at all. thanks for sharing and
i enjoyed the read
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2015
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i love this it moves quickly the rhyme
is very catchy and the words made me
smile. of course you are a poet no doubt
in my mind at all. thanks for sharing and
i enjoyed the read
Comment Written 16-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2015
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Thank you Paige. Glad you liked it. Appreciate the comments.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Too true.
Keep writing poetry...and YOU ARE a poet.
Contests!!! Winning, or placing seems well nigh impossible.
I seldom enter either, AND have never won.
I guess I just don't have what it takes.
Oh well! I'm still a poet.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
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Too true.
Keep writing poetry...and YOU ARE a poet.
Contests!!! Winning, or placing seems well nigh impossible.
I seldom enter either, AND have never won.
I guess I just don't have what it takes.
Oh well! I'm still a poet.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 11-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
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Thank you Shirley. You certainly are.
Comment from rod007
Don't worry about the contest. This is a great poem.
It shows you are an excellent poet. But don't rhyme too much, you might trip and miss a line. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
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Don't worry about the contest. This is a great poem.
It shows you are an excellent poet. But don't rhyme too much, you might trip and miss a line. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
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Thank you Rod. Thanks for the warning.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Very clever! I like how you flow from topic to topic and then end with a wonderful ending. The last two verses are my favorites. You've got the details down on how to rhyme and meter a poem. Very skilled writer. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Jesse James
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Very clever! I like how you flow from topic to topic and then end with a wonderful ending. The last two verses are my favorites. You've got the details down on how to rhyme and meter a poem. Very skilled writer. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Jesse James
Comment Written 07-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Thank you so much Jesse.
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You are welcome.
Comment from RGstar
You are a poet my friend for the knowledge of forms is unequaled.
Over the last two years I have seen a vast improvement in your expressive skills, away from your technical.
Keep writing.
My beast to you.
RG
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2015
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You are a poet my friend for the knowledge of forms is unequaled.
Over the last two years I have seen a vast improvement in your expressive skills, away from your technical.
Keep writing.
My beast to you.
RG
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much RG, that'sa great compliment.
Comment from robyn corum
Tom!
No wonder you can concentrate so well on your poetry! You have NOTHING on your walls or near your computer to distract you! Oh my -- WHAT A CONCEPT!
I got a LOT from this poem, my friend~! *smile*
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2015
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Tom!
No wonder you can concentrate so well on your poetry! You have NOTHING on your walls or near your computer to distract you! Oh my -- WHAT A CONCEPT!
I got a LOT from this poem, my friend~! *smile*
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2015
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Thank you Robyn. Lol.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, tresichel, you did an excellent job writing this poem about your relationship with words, I enjoyed reading it. I am sorry you missed the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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this is an excellent write, tresichel, you did an excellent job writing this poem about your relationship with words, I enjoyed reading it. I am sorry you missed the contest.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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Ethanol you sweetwoôdjax.
Comment from Joan E.
I've read a few of the entries for the contest and I really like yours--I'm sorry you missed the deadline, but I'm glad you shared the poem and the photo. Thanks for giving your wife credit--I thought it was the proverbial selfie! I enjoyed your rhymes and find you guilty as charged, my poet friend. More cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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I've read a few of the entries for the contest and I really like yours--I'm sorry you missed the deadline, but I'm glad you shared the poem and the photo. Thanks for giving your wife credit--I thought it was the proverbial selfie! I enjoyed your rhymes and find you guilty as charged, my poet friend. More cheers- Joan
Comment Written 03-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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Thank you, Joan. She snuck up on me.
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Good for her--a candid shot! Smiles- Joan
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Oh, I most certainly believe you're a poet. Sorry you missed the deadline.
Loved the rhyming. Great photo--churnin' out the words, are ya?
Maybe someday I'll write something in verse . . . . .!
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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Oh, I most certainly believe you're a poet. Sorry you missed the deadline.
Loved the rhyming. Great photo--churnin' out the words, are ya?
Maybe someday I'll write something in verse . . . . .!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2015
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Thank you. Yup, there always tomorrow. Or is there?
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The "wise ones" say we really only have today. :D
