Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 331 "Night's Transition"Small and Specialty Poems
9 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
One of the things that I liked best about your poem is that it moved throughout dusk and ended at the dawning of a new day. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015
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One of the things that I liked best about your poem is that it moved throughout dusk and ended at the dawning of a new day. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 11-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2015
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Thank you Ric.
Comment from ravenblack
This is not a poem...just kidding. I was flipped the ol' one star bird from the same w/the same reasoning. This is a really strong entry into the contest, a gradual and graceful turn of dusk to dawn.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015
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This is not a poem...just kidding. I was flipped the ol' one star bird from the same w/the same reasoning. This is a really strong entry into the contest, a gradual and graceful turn of dusk to dawn.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015
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Thank you ravenblack. You got me there for a moment.
Comment from rod007
These lines create an emotional impact in the soothing words that speaks of the transition between dusk and dawn. I saw that a standard member gave you a poor rating which was completely unjustified so don't let it affect you. It happens to me too. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015
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These lines create an emotional impact in the soothing words that speaks of the transition between dusk and dawn. I saw that a standard member gave you a poor rating which was completely unjustified so don't let it affect you. It happens to me too. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015
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Thank you Rod. I do get angry when fools run rampant. But, it has passed and I've only broken a few things. Just kidding.
Comment from robyn corum
Tom,
This is a lovely poem. You've done a SUPERB job with the transition from the quiet end of day that closes with a colorful sunset to the brilliant new beginning day that starts of with the glorious new sun. I enjoyed it! Great work!
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015
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Tom,
This is a lovely poem. You've done a SUPERB job with the transition from the quiet end of day that closes with a colorful sunset to the brilliant new beginning day that starts of with the glorious new sun. I enjoyed it! Great work!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015
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Thank you Robyn. I appreciate the feedback.
Comment from Joan E.
What a dramatic photograph and presentation with the Diamante reflecting the image! I admired the circularity of your poem from "Dusk" to "Dawn" and your inclusion of alliteration. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015
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What a dramatic photograph and presentation with the Diamante reflecting the image! I admired the circularity of your poem from "Dusk" to "Dawn" and your inclusion of alliteration. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 28-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015
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Thank you Joan. Supportive and astute, as always.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A beautiful poem to include dusk and dawn in one poem. The form of the poem takes the form of a diamant. Once again an excellent photo.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015
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A beautiful poem to include dusk and dawn in one poem. The form of the poem takes the form of a diamant. Once again an excellent photo.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015
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Thank you Sandra.
Comment from I am Cat
Hello Tom,
I see you've fell victim to a troll or something. :(
Well, no matter, this should render his/her review useless. ;)
As it should be.
This is a lovely Diamonte Poem, and if only one would take the time to read that it's a contest entry, they could see it's written to a form.
You know the saying, "It's hard to fly with the eagles... " well, you know the rest. ;)
Anyway... good luck in the contest my friend! ;)
Cat
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2015
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Hello Tom,
I see you've fell victim to a troll or something. :(
Well, no matter, this should render his/her review useless. ;)
As it should be.
This is a lovely Diamonte Poem, and if only one would take the time to read that it's a contest entry, they could see it's written to a form.
You know the saying, "It's hard to fly with the eagles... " well, you know the rest. ;)
Anyway... good luck in the contest my friend! ;)
Cat
Comment Written 27-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2015
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Thank you Cat. I can stop screaming and frothing now.
Comment from jenisu1
I appreciate the beautiful picture, and lovely words, however, I don't consider
this poetry, but the soothing, peaceful words in this short verse is very good.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2015
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I appreciate the beautiful picture, and lovely words, however, I don't consider
this poetry, but the soothing, peaceful words in this short verse is very good.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2015
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What! This is an entry in a contest to a required format. Go see the rules, and then reconsider your response.
Comment from Pantygynt
A somewhat reflective poem if you'll pardon the pun, but your little diamante reflective symmetry in its own right echoes the reflection in the artwork and, after all what is dawn but dusk from the opposite direction.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2015
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A somewhat reflective poem if you'll pardon the pun, but your little diamante reflective symmetry in its own right echoes the reflection in the artwork and, after all what is dawn but dusk from the opposite direction.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. Exactly.
