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Ostrichsized Again

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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LOL You said what many fell. Congratulations on your win. Your poem gives a funny view of reality. Many think that just anything and everything will work regardless of the rules or good English.

Well deserved win.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2015

Comment from rama devi
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Hilarious wit and satire, Mikey! Congrats on winning. This is super entertaining and certain;y deserving of the winning spot. Bravo. Lots of chuckles ensued reading this...and giggles too. Some favorite word plays:

ianambic pentalameter

"apple" and "orange" dont rhyme. HELLO!! There both fruits. DUH!!!

DISQUALIFICARNATION


Feminized and Shankspeer

and

conspiriatorlizationizing



Hee hee

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2015

Comment from seaglass
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This is very funny and the spelling looks just fine to me. I'll bet you will win this contest. Writing incorrectly can be more challenging the the other way around. Anyway, Mark Twain said, "I never did have much respect for a fella who could only spell a word one way."

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2015

Comment from TAB_that's me
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This is hilarious Mikey and I am glad it one. I don't spend as much time on FS so I didn't get to read any any of the entries before now. Yours was great.
teresa

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2015

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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LOL! I just cannot believe you haven't won a contest yet, I mean to say, your use of the English language is amazing, awesome even! I can see you have a unique talent, and one to be envied. Good luck in this one! :) Sandra

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2015

Comment from CALLAHANMR
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deer lser
I kant no why yo cud loose wit yop exemlarry spillin. batter luk nex tim. May b judging wil git bitter den.

Roger

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2015

Comment from ~Dovey
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Illustrating your character with all the misspelling and grammatical errors made this a comical and exaggerated piece. You've certainly had your rant and made good points. This one was funny. I hope you will find it to do well in the contest. Good luck!

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2015

Comment from scd41
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You have made a heady brew with interesting coined words and sarcasm. Coined words starting with the title and twisting well known idiomatic expressions are sufficient proofs of your creativity. I have upped my two fingers already for V for your win.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2015

Comment from BeasPeas
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That's bout the size of it--(no pun intended). Them's that wins ala time are probly darlin's of the sight. Justa keep a righting for yurself and yull be OK.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2015

Comment from patcelaw
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At the end of a longggggggggggggg hot day I needed some comic relief and that you provided me with this one. I must say the spelling and the made up words made this for a funny read/ You may or may not have gotten my vote.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2015