Life of the Party
Bigfoot at a Halloween Party16 total reviews
Comment from frogbook
Very original and funny. I liked the ending. The only thing that wasn't new was humans making fools of themselves-haha. Great idea.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Very original and funny. I liked the ending. The only thing that wasn't new was humans making fools of themselves-haha. Great idea.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. I appreciate your positive comments. Elaine
Comment from OLA THOMAS
'Naughty Bigfoots'...Lol! This is done with a fine sense of creativity and ingenuity. Your write was so clean and clear to make this look real. I enjoyed my read.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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'Naughty Bigfoots'...Lol! This is done with a fine sense of creativity and ingenuity. Your write was so clean and clear to make this look real. I enjoyed my read.
ola thomas
Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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I am glad you enjoyed Bigfoot's night out. Love your review. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from mvbrooks
What a clever story. Having Big Foot crash a Halloween party and just fit in is a great story-line. The description is strong and the narration is consistent and believable. Charming story, and very timely. Very well written.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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What a clever story. Having Big Foot crash a Halloween party and just fit in is a great story-line. The description is strong and the narration is consistent and believable. Charming story, and very timely. Very well written.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Thanks again for a wonderful review. I am honored by your generous amount of stars. Thank you! Elaine
Comment from EMB
First of all, shouldn't it be "trickers and treaters"? LOL Bigfoot crashing a party at a party where everyone is dressed like a Bigfoot? Sounds like a hairy situation, but I enjoyed following this wild tale. Way to go, Bigfoot! :)
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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First of all, shouldn't it be "trickers and treaters"? LOL Bigfoot crashing a party at a party where everyone is dressed like a Bigfoot? Sounds like a hairy situation, but I enjoyed following this wild tale. Way to go, Bigfoot! :)
Comment Written 02-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Love your review! Thanks so much and sorry I am so late in replying. Elaine
Comment from Shanaya3
Absolutely magnificent! Who would have thought! I bow to your creativity and choice of word! The story is so light and with the right dose of humor. Amazingly no one goes past the mask to know the real you and it depicts human nature at it's core!! Thumbs up!
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Absolutely magnificent! Who would have thought! I bow to your creativity and choice of word! The story is so light and with the right dose of humor. Amazingly no one goes past the mask to know the real you and it depicts human nature at it's core!! Thumbs up!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Thanks for a wonderful review. Elaine
Comment from Connie C
I absolutely loved this, Elaine! What a clever idea for a story, having the real thing mix in with all the humans who were disguised as what he actually is! I like how you end the story too, with the simple sentence, "Silly humans, he thought."
Thanks for sharing. I truly enjoyed this.
Connie
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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I absolutely loved this, Elaine! What a clever idea for a story, having the real thing mix in with all the humans who were disguised as what he actually is! I like how you end the story too, with the simple sentence, "Silly humans, he thought."
Thanks for sharing. I truly enjoyed this.
Connie
Comment Written 27-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Thanks again for a generous amount of stars! Elaine
Comment from Spitfire
Fantasy is right. What a hoot. Enjoyed the karaoke song choices although the titles should be in italics. Hey, tell Bigfoot that making a new friend is better than winning any silly contest. :-)
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Fantasy is right. What a hoot. Enjoyed the karaoke song choices although the titles should be in italics. Hey, tell Bigfoot that making a new friend is better than winning any silly contest. :-)
Comment Written 26-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Love your review and thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from Gert sherwood
What a cute Halloween story about a real ape having fun and none of the human realized Bigfoot was the real thin..
Only the very observing was the Persian cat.
I take it the cat was really a cat
Thank you for sharing mermaids
Gert
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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What a cute Halloween story about a real ape having fun and none of the human realized Bigfoot was the real thin..
Only the very observing was the Persian cat.
I take it the cat was really a cat
Thank you for sharing mermaids
Gert
Comment Written 26-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from judiverse
What a fun evening for the real Bigfoot! He fit right in with all the other Bigfoots parading in their costumes. He won quite a few of the contests, although he was disappointed when he didn't win. After all, he was the real thing. I like that the black cat is the only one who realizes he's the real thing. Some problems with formatting the paragraphs in this. Also, use quotations around the song titles. Good for you to try something new! judi
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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What a fun evening for the real Bigfoot! He fit right in with all the other Bigfoots parading in their costumes. He won quite a few of the contests, although he was disappointed when he didn't win. After all, he was the real thing. I like that the black cat is the only one who realizes he's the real thing. Some problems with formatting the paragraphs in this. Also, use quotations around the song titles. Good for you to try something new! judi
Comment Written 26-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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I have great difficulty in formatting paragraphs, they never appear correct on the computer. Thanks for reading and your suggestions, this is all new to me and I plan on writing more stories. Elaine
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You're welcome, Elaine. I'm missing the Classic Fan Story. So much easier to find and read stuff on it. judi
Comment from jpduck
I thought this was fun, and rather delightful.
'The large primate had wandered into neighborhoods full of trick[s] and treaters'
'False teeth were floating around everywhere' (False teeth don't float!).
Adrian
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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I thought this was fun, and rather delightful.
'The large primate had wandered into neighborhoods full of trick[s] and treaters'
'False teeth were floating around everywhere' (False teeth don't float!).
Adrian
Comment Written 26-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Hahaha...good point about the false teeth, but this is Halloween, maybe possessed teeth can float? Thanks for a great review. Elaine
